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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Edhi Welfare Foundation

  1. Hamza Afzal profile image63
    Hamza Afzalposted 8 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Edhi Welfare Foundation (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. chasmac profile image98
    chasmacposted 8 months ago

    The link asking for donations for the foundation might be a problem.

  3. SherrieWeynand profile image94
    SherrieWeynandposted 8 months ago

    I agree, the donation link is one of the problems. Slight grammar issues also, but I think that might be a result of maybe English isn't a first language? Example: "for the family of deceased may come to claim." Perhaps find someone to proofread and make a few small grammatical issues. Include sources for your images as well.

  4. SherrieWeynand profile image94
    SherrieWeynandposted 8 months ago

    That should have read: make a few small grammatical changes.

    My phone has a mind of its own this morning.

 
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