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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Tips And Foods To Avoid Heat Stroke

  1. Haroon Ishtiaq profile image61
    Haroon Ishtiaqposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Tips And Foods To Avoid Heat Stroke (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      This is the sort of thing that is published all over the internet. It's generic and boring. You are competing with actual medical sites that have authority in this topic.

      Rewriting information that is already readily available is never a good idea. Sorry to be mean but why don't you write something original?

      1. Haroon Ishtiaq profile image61
        Haroon Ishtiaqposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        Madam what you meant by original. Please share some tips.

        1. theraggededge profile image99
          theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

          I mean writing that cannot be found elsewhere on the internet.

          Type 'Prevent heat stroke' into Google and see how many results come up and which are the top sites. That's what you are competing with and it will never work.

          Write something that interests you. Something that shows your unique perspective. Don't recycle other people's work. Be creative. Tell us something we don't know.

  2. ketan pande profile image30
    ketan pandeposted 6 months ago

    Please proofread your article, there are many mistakes. Also, try to elaborate the article.

 
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