I'd like feedback on my Hub: Hiking City View Trail

  1. maddadkeith profile image69
    maddadkeithposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Hiking City View Trail (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Should it be 'Hiking the City View Trail'?

      Try reading the text out loud. You'll pick up several typos. Reading aloud uses a different area of the brain than skimming your own writing. We all look at our mistakes without actually seeing them. Printing it out also helps.

      Also, many people say 'off of'. It's just 'off' smile

      Remove the bio info from the end and put it into the author bio. Click on the tab 'About the Author' on your account page. You can add different bios for different hubs.

      Hope that helps.

      1. maddadkeith profile image69
        maddadkeithposted 5 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you for the feedback. I am here to learn. And, I will.

 
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