I'd like feedback on my article: Golden Gift

  1. Akahnd raj profile image46
    Akahnd rajposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Golden Gift (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image100
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 weeks ago

    Somebody has to tell you, and it might as well be me, that your English is not up to the standard required by HubPages.

    This platform requires near-perfect English language skills, informative, magazine-style articles that are media-rich and original.

 
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