I'd like feedback on my article: Are you living a life of worth?

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    Rishu shrivastavposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Are you living a life of worth? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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    Rupert Taylorposted 2 weeks ago

    The main problem is that your command of English is not up the standard required by HubPages. There are simply too many errors of sentence construction, grammar, and word choice.

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      Rishu shrivastavposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thanx I will work on those things

 
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