I'd like feedback on my article: Motivation In Life!

  1. Shrey Gupta profile image59
    Shrey Guptaposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Motivation In Life! (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. TessSchlesinger profile image94
    TessSchlesingerposted 2 months ago

    Shrey, welcome to hubpages. Might I ask you if you want to preach the gospel or if you want to have your articles featured and put onto a niche site? Or do you want to make money?

    As a reader, I was most interested in your title "Motivation in Life." As an athiest, the moment you mentioned God, I was out of there....

    It's also not true that everybody wants to do something great in life. Scorpios, yes. Us Leos - we just want to party! smile

    I think the article should be more focused on what motivation is, what its benefits are, what happens  if one doesn't have it, etc.

    I also think your article should be at least 1200 words long. In my experience, the longer an article is,a) the more likely it gets featured and b) the more likely it is to get traffic from google.

    Hope that helps.