Poetry

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  1. Pamda Man profile image49
    Pamda Manposted 9 years ago

    http://hubpages.com/hub/How-To-Write-Good-Poetry

    I just wrote this hub and wanted to see what you think of it. Is it good or bad? Anything I could add? Just wanted to see your views. smile

    Panda Man

  2. blondepoet profile image73
    blondepoetposted 9 years ago

    I certainly did Pamda smile

  3. Pamda Man profile image49
    Pamda Manposted 9 years ago

    smile x2 (or x3?)

    1. blondepoet profile image73
      blondepoetposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Lol what do you mean a Playstation??

  4. Pamda Man profile image49
    Pamda Manposted 9 years ago

    Lol. Never mind. I was trying to count the number of smile's on this thread.

    1. Colin T Mercer profile image60
      Colin T Mercerposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      I like ti poem it shows emotion which is what poetry is only on paper the only advice is to try to stay away from line that rhyme for the sake of it.
      Keep writing

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    Poppa Bluesposted 9 years ago

    Love's Refrain

    My Heart's beatin faster
    My temperature's on the rise
    This sweet feelin
    Is impossible to disguise

    Please hold me closer
    Tell me you'll stay
    Here in my arms
    And kiss me all day

    I'll shower you with kisses
    Like rain from above
    And whisper in your ear
    Words filled with love

    Soft like putty
    Here in my arms
    Bodies pressed together
    Feelin your charms

    There's no place better
    Then being here with you
    For the rest of my days
    That's all I wanna do!

    Huggin and kissin
    The peaks of passion we'll climb
    Over the edge we'll fall
    Together ‘till the end of time

    Lost in this moment
    Captured by our gaze
    Our lips come together
    Our thoughts in a haze

    Lingering lightly while
    We look deep in our souls
    Then lips slowly parting
    Our tongues explore new worlds

    Lost in sweet ecstasy
    We search to find our way
    To keep this feelin growin
    To make it last all day!

  6. Pamda Man profile image49
    Pamda Manposted 9 years ago

    Lolwat?

 
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