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   Resolver2009posted 8 years ago

   http://hubpages.com/hub/Surf-Guide-The- … it-Guide-_
   http://hubpages.com/hub/Surfing-The-Ultimate-Experience
   
   Good evening fellow hubbers! Would love it if you could give me some tips/critique/comments on my first two published hubs.. they are about surfing, my number one passion.. after the missus of course;p
   
   Have a lovely evening, looking forward to hearing your comments.
   
   // Alex

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      tantrumposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      I left my comments in your hubs. Welcome! you're a very good writer!

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   Resolver2009posted 8 years ago

   Thank you Tantrum! Really appreciate it. Have just visited your hubs aswell, and fell in love with your way of writing..
   
   She touches my skin
   
   I dream of surfing boldly
   
   the waves of my mind.

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      tantrumposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      thanks!!!

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   Will Apseposted 8 years ago

   Very neat hubs, the ultimate experience hub was genuinely gripping. I shivered involentarily. Twice.
   
   I worry a little about the waves in the title. A search engine might decide this is a misspelling. Misspellings cost you Google love and lower your rankings.
   
   Also, if you interested in making money here, I would recommend a look at http://blog.hubpages.com/2009/07/how-to … hub-topic/
   
   Its all about keywords.

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      Resolver2009posted 8 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you Will Apse! Really nice to hear that you liked it that much! I'll take you up on your advice and remove the wave symbol from the title right away. See you around!
      
      Any other advice from expert hubbers out there?

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   WittyWordsmithposted 8 years ago

   Great surfing experience! I even had my husband read it (he loves surfing) and he thought it was pretty awesome, said it was really suspenseful!

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   Crazdwriterposted 8 years ago

   Welcome to the hub world and keep up the great hubs.

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   Resolver2009posted 7 years ago

   WittyWordsmith: Thank you so much! Really heartwarming and inspiring to hear you say that.
   
   Crazdwriter: Thank you! I am up to ten hubs now. If they are great.. well, that can be discussed..

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   L. Andrew Marrposted 7 years ago

   If I may ask you something - how the heck have you got 136 fans in only two months?
   
   I only had 100 before I was banned - then I returned and have only got 26 of those back.
   
   What is your secret?

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