Can you check out my new hub :)

  1. Mr.Money411 profile image55
    Mr.Money411posted 8 years ago

    This is just my second hub am no pro hubber lol But would like you to check it out let me know what you think smile

  2. lrohner profile image81
    lrohnerposted 8 years ago

    You really need to break up the text with pictures, videos, etc. One big block of text is intimidating to some readers.

    A few of your tags didn't seem relevant: "free advertising" and "affiliate marketing".

    The biggest thing that I noticed, however, was the poor grammar, spelling and punctuation. That'll kill a hub faster than you can believe. If you don't have someone to help you out, perhaps use the spell and grammar check in MS Word.

    Good luck!

  3. Migodden profile image78
    Migoddenposted 8 years ago

    awesome hub man! I'd like to second what irohner said, you need more relevant tags big_smile