Feedback: What Race Matters would Become in America by 3020

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   Philomaxposted 5 years ago

   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: What Race Matters would Become in America by 3020 (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hello,
      
      Some suggestions:
      
      Your title doesn't really make sense. Do you mean "Possible Racial Outcomes in America by 3020"?
      
      The first image is problematic as there is text not in English.
      
      The article is too short. Expand it to about 1,000 words.
      
      You cannot state things as fact if you are looking into the future.
      
      The content also seems racist. White girls are no better than black, and black men are no better than white. To claim superiority for either is inherently racist. You can write material that reflects your opinions without showing bias.
      
      You might want to listen to the old song, 'Melting Pot' which was released in the 1960s. Your idea is not a new one.

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         Philomaxposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         I mean to say what America will become by 3020, racially speaking.
         
         The image has Bengali text, I'll try to remove the text from the image. Also, the text looks ornamental, so no problem in that view.
         
         I'll try to expand the article.
         
         I'm trying to say thing factually, mostly anticipating. The issue of race in America is such, that calculated anticipation might sound factual, because the blacks have nowhere to flee.
         
         The content is based on reality. I'm merely stating the reality of marriage as it happens in America, racially speaking.
         
         Thank you for your feedback. I'll check the song. :--)

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      OldRosesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      HubPages is an American site with a mainly American audience.  Here in the US, your views are considered racist so your article will never be popular.  You can also expect a lot of hateful comments.
      
      Your point about future racial mixtures is incorrect.  Worldwide, the subpopulation of humans with the smallest number of people are people of African descent.  The subpopulation with the largest numbers are people Asian descent.  Therefore, in the future, providing people do truly mix as you say they will, they will look Asian, not African.

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         Philomaxposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         HubPages did not publish the article. I'm pasting it here. Thank you for the honest feedback.

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            theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            Please don't paste it in the forum. Your original will be flagged as duplicate when going through QAP again.

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               Philomaxposted 5 years agoin reply to this

               OK.

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   NateB11posted 5 years ago

   Uh oh. Where'd he go?

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I think it was our old friend Das Engel. The style seemed different though.

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