I Need Feedback on my article

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  1. Okyere koranteng profile image77
    Okyere korantengposted 6 months ago

    I need feedback on my article: 15 places where gravity doesn't seem to work

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image94
    Rupert Taylorposted 6 months ago

    Nobody can offer help without a link to the article.

    1. Okyere koranteng profile image77
      Okyere korantengposted 6 months agoin reply to this
      1. Kenna McHugh profile image93
        Kenna McHughposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        At a glance, you need to capitalize Earth. You do at some points in the article, but not all. Also, the introduction is weak and unclear.
        Plus, some of your photos are not sourced, such as the waterfall in Hawaii.

        1. Okyere koranteng profile image77
          Okyere korantengposted 6 months agoin reply to this

          Thanks, I will correct them.

      2. theraggededge profile image97
        theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        Did you get permission to republish the photos? They must have a Creative Commons license or be certified Public Domain as often found on Wikipedia.

        https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

        1. Okyere koranteng profile image77
          Okyere korantengposted 6 months agoin reply to this

          I cited the sources. But I guess I need to read the entire crash course. Thanks

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image94
    Rupert Taylorposted 6 months ago

    I noticed a few minor grammatical errors that can likely be corrected by running the text through a program such as Grammarly.

    However, a bigger issue might be the images. They must be free of copyright restrictions and properly credited as to source. Check out this information from the Learning Center:

    https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

    1. Okyere koranteng profile image77
      Okyere korantengposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      I'm now trying to familiarize myself with all these bunch of info. Anyways, thanks for the advice.

      1. Kenna McHugh profile image93
        Kenna McHughposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        It's work. That is for sure.

 
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