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Still Learning!

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    Travis_S_Musicposted 6 years ago

    So, I think I'm starting to pick up on this hub thing. I've gotten a decent amount of feed back, especially on my meditation hubs. I'm working on a more detailed hub, specifically on one form of meditation now and it's taking quite some time.
    I'd like to have some other hubbers advice on how my first meditation hub was written, so I know what changes to add to my next one! (:
    http://hubpages.com/hub/LearningToMeditate

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      vocalcoachposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Good morning!

      I am replying to your post on "Still Learning".  After reading and evaluating your hub on Meditation, I have a couple of suggestions you might try.

      1.  Mindfulness Meditation - Use bullets instead of -.  Bullets bring the readers eyes to the sentence.

      2.  Always "space" between the steps you outline. (after using a bulleted sentence).


      Prayer Meditation - Break this section into parts  for easy reading.  Readers tend to tire when faced with a very long paragraph.

      This is a very good hub and you write well. Keep up the great work!
      smile

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        Travis_S_Musicposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Alrighty, thank you very much! I will be sure to take those into note and fix them, and incorporate them into my next hub on meditation (:

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        Travis_S_Musicposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Update: http://hubpages.com/hub/LearningToMeditate
        Hope it looks better! (:

        1. vocalcoach profile image94
          vocalcoachposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          Wow! What a huge difference! Lookout all you hubbers, Travis_S_Music is on his way!!!

 
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