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The Night Captive: A Vampire Story

Updated on August 11, 2010
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Victor stood outside her window, his silhouette barely visible in the muted starlight. He spied her sleeping on her bed, the duvet rising and falling with each gentle breath, a living, sensuous mound of temptation and sustenance. In an instant he appeared inside the room. His every sense was heightened and her soft breathing filled his ears as though amplified one-hundred times, the slightest sough of the sheets a raging river of sound and chaos.


Slowly and silently he moved to her side and stood there for hours admiring her form. She stirred a little but did not wake. He could taste her in his mouth. Their divine and sacred union was inevitable. He would have her. He must. He would own her. It was his right. The line of her neck was smooth and elegant, appearing from beneath her hair and disappearing under the silken cover. Even in the dark her skin glowed in the little available starlight, her delicious smoothness beckoning him to her.

As he slowly leaned toward his prize, his lip curled to reveal the two long teeth, glistening with saliva and lust. Just as he got to within one inch of his feast, the beautiful woman startled, but before she could scream his hand was on her mouth, calming her, possessing her. She did not attempt to scream or free herself. She could not. She was captured. A tiny bird held in the grip of a man. Her breath deepened. His mouth moved closer, finally reaching her flesh and biting into her skin, the two fangs plunging luxuriously into her vein and sucking her lifeblood from her. The taste was earthy and sweet.

Her eyelids fluttered and she moaned as he pulled the duvet down, exposing her naked breasts. His hand touched her softness and explored her feminine perfection.


He took her blood faster now, and her moans grew to cries and puffs of soulful air. She tensed and at once was overtaken by a flood of love and ecstasy, washing away her past, her childhood, her dreams, her very life up until this exact moment. The past was meaningless.

Her life began here, now, on a bed under a duvet in the pale light, with a man stealing her essence. As she continued to helplessly pulse and writhe, she knew she belonged to him.


Victor, sensing she was near death, withdrew his teeth from his delicious prey. He would let her live. He had made her his and she belonged to him. They would walk forever in shadows together. There was no hurry. Eternity was a long time.


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      LAmatadora 8 years ago

      ooohh what is it about the sexy appeal that vampiros have? I loved it!

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      Tom Cornett 8 years ago from Ohio

      Great writing Christoph...now I want to bite a neck. :)

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      LAmatadora: I don't know. I wish I knew..I'd get me some (of that elusive Vampire thing, I mean.) Thanks for the comment.

      Tom Cornett: Thank you. Me too. Just so long as we don't bite each others.

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      Cindy Lawson 8 years ago from Guernsey (Channel Islands)

      Fab writing Christoph, I so love all Vampire stuff, and have done since I was a very young child. Must have watched most vampire stuff ever shown on TV or film, and have read many books. (All a pet love of mine).

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Misty: Hi Stranger! Vampire's sure are popular right now, with the Twilight thing. Thanks for coming by and the comment!

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      Cindy Lawson 8 years ago from Guernsey (Channel Islands)

      Saw the Twilight film on my way back from Buenos Aires on the plane, excellent film, can't wait for the next one. Am back now, and will try not to be a stranger, but not had much time to write a lot lately as planting and weeding my huge new vegetable plot, plus my Mum just had a full knee replacement, so am taking a good few meals up to her and my Step Dad to help out. Hope to write more soon as I miss you guys :)

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Misty: We miss you too. Sounds like you have your hands (and knees) full. Hurry back!

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      Cindy Lawson 8 years ago from Guernsey (Channel Islands)

      LOL, don't you worry, loads of ideas brewing in my imagination for new hubs, just need to sort Mum and veg plot out before I can act on them :) Am still reading all of my friends hubs as much as I can, even though it means some late nights.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Well, we'll be waiting.

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      Cindy Lawson 8 years ago from Guernsey (Channel Islands)

      BTW, congrats on the 100 hubscore :)

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Thank you.

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      Cris A 8 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      Hey Chris

      Sexy is definitely back! You rock! And I'm looking forward to more of this darker, nights-in-white-satin-moody you :D

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Hey Cris! Thanks a lot. I appreciate your comment!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oh lord my heart is pounding, Edward Cullens has nothing on you. This is a dark and delicious side of you Christoph, I think you've been hiding from us. I will definitely be pay closer attention. I will also be sleeping with my window open and my neck bared!

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      Azur Moon Wolf 8 years ago

      Forbidden... Provocative... I like it... I like it a lot!

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Randy: Thanks so much! Maybe I have a muse, hmm? Ever think about that? So...you'll be sleeping with your window open, eh? You wouldn't happen to have an airplane ticket, would you? I haven't learned to fly yet.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Azur Moon Wolf:  Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate your comment!

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      Tom Rubenoff 8 years ago from United States

      "... glistening with saliva and lust." Too good.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      You're the expert, Tom, so thank you very much indeed!

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      MissJamieD 8 years ago from Minnes-O-ta

      Great job Christoph! Very sexy, I loved it:)

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I would happily amuse you Christoph. You probably don't know what you are toying with here. The appeal of a sexy vampire is unequaled. The idea of being "chosen" from a planet of entrees as a life mate, oh baby. And to be pleasured by a man, I use the term man loosely, that has a millennia of practice, holy crap. Ya, I'll definitely take some of that.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Thanks, MissJamieD! And see, didn't get your foot in your mouth once! Thanks for coming by!

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Randy: You talkin' to me? There's no other vampires here.

      Woah, woman! I should've started this vampire stuff a long time ago. Where do I sign? Where's my ticket?

      Thank you for that luxurious comment! My little vampire heart's all pitty pat!

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      Patricia Costanzo 8 years ago from Behind the Redwood Curtain

      You have hit on a secret fetish of mine, however did you know? I won't stay long for I fear a stampeed of women is surely on my heels. But, VERY sexy and VERY stimulating. Thank You for this mind candy.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Well thank you. I'll always think of you as my first!

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      Jewels 8 years ago from Australia

      I think I've been lured into the imaginery world of wanton lust and things.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Jewels: Yes. I accept responsibility!

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      Jewels 8 years ago from Australia

      Well best there be a sequel, you just can't leave people hanging like this. You can't just lure and leave - not kosher.

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      sheenarobins 8 years ago from Cebu, Philippines

      Can I be the 'she' in your hub? LOL. I like it very much Christoph. Vampires, what's with them?

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Jewels: I decide what is kosher. I'm sure you can imagine the rest. Ha, ha.

      Sheena: If you wish to be the she, then go ahead. What IS up with Vampires?

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      mayhmong 8 years ago from North Carolina

      Yeah, same here Sheenarobins! He can come visit me any time, as long as he doesn't kill me!

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      spryte 8 years ago from Arizona, USA

      I always knew you were a bit batty...

      It was the garlic douche wasn't it? :)

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      Jewels 8 years ago from Australia

      where would Christoph put his douche?

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      VioletSun 8 years ago from Oregon/ Name: Marie

      Are you sure you are not a vampire and we don't know about it? :::checking to see if all your hubs are written at night::::::: :) It was very sensual writing, got caught up in the story.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Mayhmong: Oh no. Never. You may live.

      Spryte: Ha! Notice he never goes below her waist! Ha, ha!

      Jewels: Oh, it's not MY douche!

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Violet: I'm not sure of anything anymore. I woke at sundown in an oblong box. What's happening to me!

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      dianacharles 8 years ago from India

      Erotic and yet a bit chilling...I used to be a real fan of vampire movies. When is the sequel?

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      Om Prakash Singh 8 years ago from India, Calcutta

      I enjoyed reading this but why was this so short. Looks like you were not in the perfect mood to write because generally I find your Hub very detailed and very lengthy. Actually I was looking forward to more detailed description of the beauty of the sleeping beauty but still it was a good reading, it made me feel yo yo yo... ;)

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      sheenarobins 8 years ago from Cebu, Philippines

      I think he bit me on my lips while he was kissing and tasting, me, myself and I. It's bleeding now but I close my eyes and a shiver runs under my spine.

      "Victor, come back to me my love. don't go to Patty, not yet! You are mine...all mine."

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      pgrundy 8 years ago

      Wowee. Let's have that sequel!

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      countrywomen 8 years ago from Washington, USA

      First of all congrats on the 100 score. Btw are attractive women supposed to be the prize catch for Dracula since those women can get there victims much more easier than the sudden guerilla tactics that the Dracula employs ;)

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      Pam Roberson 8 years ago from Virginia

      Oh so yummy! Lust for blood, lust for feminine perfection, lust for lust...it's all good. :) This is a whole new delicious side of you that is as irresistible as the other side. I loved it!

      I've been fascinated by the progression of vampires from being creepy to sexy. Remember Dark Shadows? Barnabas Collins was not sexy, although he did manage to seduce women with that mind control thing. Now vampires don't need mind control because they're hawt!

      Thanks for a dark and steamy read! :)

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      dianacharles: Thanks for stopping in. I appreciate your comment!

      packerpack: Thanks for reading.

      sheena: Yes, I will come to you! (Somebody needs to tend to that bleeding lip!) As always, a pleasure!

      pgrundy: Thanks for reading. As for a sequel, this was just a trifle.

      countrywomen: Hi! I'm not really up on all the Vampire lore, but I would say attractive women taste better and they look better in the movies. Thanks for visiting!

      Pam: Vampires may now be hawt, but the mind control still comes in handy. I can see it now, with the woman saying: "Oh..you're not going out again?" and "Who's lipstick is that on your neck?" A little mind control and she's all wearing open-necked blouses aroud the castle and "accidentally" pricking her finger in front of him.

      Thanks for your kind words.

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      Patricia Costanzo 8 years ago from Behind the Redwood Curtain

      If I prick my finger will you come to me? Sheena is being down right greedy, and is that her lipstick on your neck?

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      Cindy Vine 8 years ago from Cape Town

      Vampires, now I'm going to have nightmares as it's my bedtime now. Thanks a lot.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Cindy: Sleep with a large, garlicy sausage.

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      Wendy Iturrizaga 8 years ago from France

      What a turn on... I guess somehow we are all attracted to the dark side. Great writing Christoph.

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      Artisan Walker 8 years ago from Springfield, Oregon

      Christoph, this was excellent! Truly. And I liked that it wasn't too long. It didn't need to be.

      I was jazzed to see my vampire piece in the RELATED HUBS line. I keep good company!

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Princessa: Yes..I don't know why. Thanks for your sweet comment, Princessa! Now, I'm turned on!

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      Wendy Iturrizaga 8 years ago from France

      Just one question Cristoph: Is the garlic sausage to scare the vampire with the garlic? to hit the vampire in the head with it he comes? or is it for cindy's personal use?

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Artisan:  Thanks for coming by.  It's a nice surprise to see you here.  Thanks for your kind words (take that, packerpack!).

      And it is I who am good company if this is being related to your most excellent article on Vampires!  Thanks, my friend!

      Princessa: In Cindy's case, I dare say it is all three...not necessarily in that order!

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Patricia: Sorry I missed you up there. If you pricked your finger, I would have to come to you. How could I resist? As for the lipstick on my neck, I don't remember. I was out with the ghouls and I had a few pints too many, so my memory is a little fuzzy.

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      Sherri 8 years ago from Southeastern Pennsylvania

      I read this one just after I finished reading Mr. Know-It-All. I should have waited to read this one until tomorrow, because, I swear, I kept waiting for the punch line...I was sure Victor was a cat!

      Always, you amaze and delight. Your adoring fan, S.

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      C.S.Alexis 8 years ago from NW Indiana

      Sweet! Thumbs up Christoph.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Sally: Victor WAS a cat! Didn't you get that? Oh, man, back to the writing board!!!

      S.S. Alexis: Thank you for the "sweet." I appreciate your stopping by and your comment!

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      Sherri 8 years ago from Southeastern Pennsylvania

      Well, if I don't keep you on your toes, who will? :)

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      I am already hearing complaints. Ok...Victor is NOT a cat. He is a Vampire. He is manly and virile and he wants YOU!

      Sally: There is a line of people who keep me on my toes!

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      Peggy Woods 8 years ago from Houston, Texas

      Good fantasy writing! Now where is my cross and wooden stake?

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Peggy: Why, they're right over here, Peggy, I have them. Closer....closer....

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      Peggy Woods 8 years ago from Houston, Texas

      Ah you fang toothed seductor!

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Peggy: I can't help it. It's in your blood.

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      marisuewrites 8 years ago from USA

      Now I'm really scared and won't sleep a wink. I've bolted all the windows and pulled the curtains. Vampires suck the life out of me.

      I'm there. I'm so there.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Marisue: Bolting the windows will not keep me...uh...the Vampires out. I think you'd make a tasty little treat!

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      marisuewrites 8 years ago from USA

      I'll bite you back.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Promise?

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      blondepoet 8 years ago from australia

      Damn that was hot as. i tell you what I just came from GT's erotic piece, then went to Cindys reading about sausages, and then here...ooo....damn vampires are sexy.....between u and GT you have done more than enough to me for one day.... thankyou very much....lol. I think many a female Hubber's screens are sizzling today as Pam would say LMAO

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      BlondePoet:  I am most gratified to be part of your erotic travels today.  Thanks for reading, and your titillating comment!

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      blondepoet 8 years ago from australia

      Where have you been lately CR, have you been busy writing stories, never see you nomore :(

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      I've been here. I thought you were missing. Oh, I have been going to bed earlier, so maybe that's why you haven't seen me around.

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      kea 8 years ago

      Well done!  I'm going to try this approach. :)

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Chris, Maybe you were on another continent last night... but I did leave my window open. I waited, and I waited and I was very disappointed to wake up with all my blood still in my veins.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Darn! I think I took a wrong turn at Albeqerque!

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      Cris A 8 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      Hey Chris

      I really am demanding for a sequel! Or I'll quit your fan club, along with my 50 alteregos! :D

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      sheenarobins 8 years ago from Cebu, Philippines

      Victor? Victor? Is he here? Oh, no sequel yet. I'm waiting...waiting!

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Cris: Honestly, I think it would just be the same thing in a different locale, but I'll think about it. Nice interview today, and thanks. That English is your second language makes me want to hang my head.

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      blondepoet 8 years ago from australia

      At least Christopher talks to you Sheena he is a true gentleman, he would never ignore us.

      Heck Cris has all those egos,maybe he may be the guy who told me my Hubs need formatting the other day,maybe he is the one I told to put his finger on his head and say red backwards,maybe he is the one I did other things with.I am a little nervous now what I say to people haha.

      Omg he has not talked to you yet, but hey he will Sheena, "he is the man if anyone can do it C Reilly can".

      Also how come I never get bitten by a vampire, the closest I have come to that is a German Sheperd, it was not a pleasant bite I can tell you.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      sheena: Well, maybe I can make him go after a sweet little girl in the Philippines! Hmmm, I'll need an inspiration...

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      Cris A 8 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      Chris

      With your gift in writing, you could take this anywhere you want and your readers will follow. What about some badass vampires? What am I saying? You are creative and you'll figure out a way not to fall for repetitiveness, unoriginality and predictability.

      But hey, no pressure (BUT I WANT IT SOON!) :D

      Oh the interview - Pam gets half the credit :D

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      B.P: Why would I? And who doesn't talk to you?

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      B.P. Did you add a bunch to your comment. What's going on here? You lost me.

      Chris: Thanks, but I am less sure than you. I will think about it though. Pam was good, that's for sure!

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      blondepoet 8 years ago from australia

      What do you mean I lost you Chris, now you have lost me.What are you talking about lol a bunch of ???? Do you mean grapes,...oh boy...tell me what you are having trouble with understanding and I shall clarify.

      I basically said I want a vampire to bite me in favour of a dog.

      That CrisA has lots of aliases, and I hope he was not one of the blokes I have been giving a hard time, and thirdly I said you are a gentleman, as poor Sheena has posted comments on other pages and the wally whackers there have ignored her. Gee whiz my hand is dropping off here LMAO

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Ok. I get it. I got the dog part already, so keep your skivvies on...or don't...or...ohhhhhhh.

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      blondepoet 8 years ago from australia

      hahahahahahhahahaha

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      badcompany: I'll definitely consider you for the part of Victor. Do you have any acting experience, or just experience biting girls on the neck? Thanks for the comment.

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      Aya_Hajime 8 years ago

      Ah vampires, they take your life, and you love them for it.

      Does this mean that many women secretly wish to be mastered? taken? consumed? Hmmmm.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Aya: I'm not sure what the deal is with women's attraction to Vampires, but you may be hitting on it, purely in a fantasy sense, of course. Thanks for reading and the comment.

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      marisuewrites 8 years ago from USA

      I don't know what's going on, but my computer is laying on the floor jerking and wiggling, rolling around, it's quite disgusting. I can't even stroke the keyboard for God's sake.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      marisue: Ha, ha. Oh, those naughty computers! Yes, you must be careful about stroking their keyboards while they are in this condition. They are liable to go off on internet searches for who knows what all by themselves! Thanks for alerting me. Should I call the Geek Squad?

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      marisuewrites 8 years ago from USA

      No, I'm actually quite enthralled by the whole thing. It's quite theatrical. I'm learning....

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Well, thank you, Marisue. A very nice thing to say!

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      ajcor 8 years ago from NSW. Australia

      "There was no hurry. Eternity was a long time." A Happy biting Season to you Christoph and may there be many more....great read..cheers

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      ajcor: So nice to see you! Thanks for the visit and the comment! Cheerio!

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      Laughing Mom 8 years ago

      Oh wow, Christoph. I was totally unprepared for that! Sensual hardly describes it.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Laughing mom: Well thank you. That's a lovely compliment! Glad you read it!

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      Laughing Mom 8 years ago

      I'm very, very behind, but I'm hoping to get caught up soon!

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Your poor head! I take it you're feeling better?

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      Shadesbreath 8 years ago from California

      I am offended by your use of the word "breast" and will be reporting you to the HubPages authorities.  I have a delicate sensibility and all this saliva and lust talk is provocative and makes for glandular activity of a most disturbing nature in places that must not be discussed.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Shades: You're so right. Whatever was I thinking? I never should have let the ladies talk me into writing this. I'd better get to church!

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      anjalichugh 8 years ago from New York

      Hey Chris! Never knew that horror could involve such great passion too. Wow! You made it look so horny. Good job.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Hey Anj! Ha, ha! But how do you feel, Anj? Are you horny?

      Thanks so much for reading, and for the refreshing comment!

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      anjalichugh 8 years ago from New York

      SSShh! Do you expect me to answer that here? lol

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Hi Anj! I would LIKE you to answer that here, but I don't expect you to. No, no, you are far too much the proper lady for such public admissions of a...dare I say it...(sotto voice) sexual nature! Thank you for starting off my day with an orgasm...uh...no....I mean...a laugh! A LAUGH!

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      Laila Rajaratnam 8 years ago from India

      Christoph..Haven't seen Twilight..but ,I am terrified of the Count thundering through the sinister night in his black chariot drawn by black horses and finding the way to a beautiful woman through her window!Till today it sends shivers thro' my spine!You have described Victor(or...ahem..you?lol..)so very romantically..but I'm still terrified!I see that I'm the lone terrfied person!LOL!A really beautiful hub!Thanks!

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Laila: I won't hurt you, Laila. I'll just bite you a little bit. Ha, ha! Thanks so much for your kind words and the lovely comment!

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      MellasViews 8 years ago from Earth

      I havent seen Twilight yet either, but all the kids are going ga ga over it. I loved the story CR. Still my favorite vamp flick is Interview with a Vampire. I was captivated by Brad Pitts contacts! lol.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      They were something, weren't they? Thanks for the comment.

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      Candie V 8 years ago from Whereever there's wolves!! And Bikers!! Cummon Flash, We need an adventure!

      "Dorothy aka Dot" wants to know if she can play the girl in the bed? Or since you have a lot of cast members already here, maybe someone in leather to challenge him? *Pick me!*

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Candie V: That's an offer I can't refuse. Thanks for the visit and your audition! Casting has not been completed.

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      Candie V 8 years ago from Whereever there's wolves!! And Bikers!! Cummon Flash, We need an adventure!

      If you need glossies, I shall send some... I have no acting experience, so I shall just be me, and can I have a trailer for "character" practice? Maybe some pointers from the author? (chuckle)

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      Benson Yeung 8 years ago from Hong Kong

      now I know I can hold my breath for 3 minutes.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Benson: Thank you, Sir! You are a scholar and a gentleman!

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      Am I dead, yet? 7 years ago

      the ending. it is always about the ending. Christoph, I adore vampire tales. This one was amazing...on to the next.

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      Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

      AIDY: Thank you for coming and reading. Certainly glad you liked it and I appreciate your saying so. I think I'll follow you to the next.....

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oooops. You caught me drooling. Just thought Victor might be getting lonely, only having two hubs to go between. I think he'd be more comfortable if he could stretch his wings to... I don't know a THIRD hub.

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      Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

      Randy: Victor hears you and he feels your pain. Maybe he'll let me tell another of his stories soon.

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      *big grin*

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      mysterylady 89 6 years ago from Florida

      Earlier today I read Shadesbreath's hub where he did a take-off on this hub and Pam's. Thus, I had to visit. I enjoyed, and I'll be back.

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      Christoph Reilly 6 years ago from St. Louis

      Mystery Lady: How wonderful to see you. I've been terribly neglectful of all my friends. I'll remedy that and visit you tonight (to bite your neck, perhaps.)

      Ha, ha, yes, Shadesbreath, that dirty dog, always poking fun at me. I must read that again myself. Thanks for visiting, you Mystery you.

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      arusho 5 years ago from University Place, Wa.

      Very descriptive, I loved it!

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