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silent night...ghostly night

Updated on November 8, 2012

And the wind whispered in the hollows as twilight descended over the land.

Gray, cold fog swirled around gnarled tree roots, slithering then up the trunks and winding through branches that seemed to stretch like a hand reaching from the grave.

The moon rose over the horizon and cast a ghostly light, creating shadows for things to hide.

The house stood on the hill, dark and dank from years left unattended. Curtains hung in tatters and broken windows allowed the fog to enter. It snaked across the room like smoke.

The floors creaked. The wind moaned. The broken shutter that hung on one hinge slowly swung and hit the house with a dull thud. The little girl giggled. It echoed through the empty rooms. The cat on the porch railing arched it's back and hissed; it's yellow eyes glowed in the moonlight.

The moon moved through the night sky and the leafless trees cast their dark shadows on the house. Something moved across the overgrown lawn, it's footfalls slow and deliberate.

He was coming, the little girl knew it. But there was no place to hide.

The footfalls came closer. One stair, then another and another. The old boards on the porch moaned in protest. His dark shape filled the door. He laughed a very deep laugh that was more like a growl. His teeth, yellowed by death, gleamed eerily through the fog. His eyes burned red like the fires of hell. His breath was cold and smelled of decay.

He reached for her. Tattered clothing hung in strands from his arm bones; his bony fingers extended out like the branches of trees. "Come to me," his rattling voice demanded.

She sat very still.

The cat howled. He laughed again and stepped closer. Thud....Thud...Thud...

She watched and waited. The wind blew through the trees. The shutter knocked.

Midnight whispered it's warning.......

The cat jumped on her and startled her from sleep. She looked at the was Midnight.

"Damn it blackie, I thought I let you nearly scared me to death!" she said as she ran her hand down his back. He meowed. She picked him up and padded across the room and into the front of the house. The door was open. Muddy footprints tracked across the floor and disappeared into nowhere. She called out.

He laughed. The fog swirled in.


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      moonfairy 5 years ago

      Dr. Cil...thanks for visiting and for voting up!

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      Dr Cil 5 years ago

      Great story, voted up! Can't wait for more!

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      moonfairy 5 years ago patient my friend.............

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      dreamseeker2 5 years ago

      Hey, it ended too soon! Loved it though!! Great writing. I need more please...; )

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      moonfairy 5 years ago

      MichaelJohnMele....thanks a bunch for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed!

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      Michael John Mele 5 years ago from Seffner, Florida

      After reading that I may have to sleep with the lights on tonight. Great read...very well done.

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      moonfairy 5 years ago

      shiningirisheyes, thanks again!!! Yes, I love spooky as well. thanks for your feedback =)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Wonderfully spine tingling read. I love all things "spooky" and you certainly provided it with this awesome and creepy write.

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      moonfairy 5 years ago

      Seeker7 and btrbell, thank you both for reading, for the feedback and for the votes....glad you enjoyed =)

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      Randi Benlulu 5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Great story, great twist at the end! Thank you! up+

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      Helen Murphy Howell 5 years ago from Fife, Scotland

      I love this creepy, scary tale!! Your descriptive writing creates such vivid pictures and a strong sensation of fear and hauntings.

      I also love the 'dream' that turns out not to be a dream. The boundary between reality and other dimensions are much closer than we think and your awesome story highlights this beautifully!! Voted up + shared!