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A Fiery Dragon(Critic)

Updated on September 21, 2015


You are a fiery dragon

Blowing doubt

Every time

I dispatch a paper fly to the moon.

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      Hari Prasad S 24 months ago from Bangalore

      Nice.

      undoubtedly, a crouching tiger,

      has hidden dragons.

      - Hari

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      Audrey Howitt 24 months ago from California

      This made me smile a bit--although you know, critics have their way of upsetting my day

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      Ann Carr 2 years ago from SW England

      Great imagery; much said in so few words.

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Intelligent poem. Cool, Bro.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      yeah, I like this.. clever