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A Knowing

Updated on May 20, 2009

Something Inside of Me

There is something inside of me

That you didn't put there

Something that crept into my soul

While I was unaware

Can it be that we alone - are whole?

And n o one needs another

To complete their soul?

Perhaps upon the journey

we sometimes feel unsure

so we reach for anothers hand

to feel more secure

But we came ino this world

A shining light

That's strong enough

to take us through

the darkest night.

There is something inside of me

that needs to say

That I don't have to NEED you

and that its okay

Wouldn't it be better if I just said

I would like you to be

part of my life instead?

What are we without the fear

and insecurity

Perhaps we are then exactly

what we're supposed to be?

And can't we just walk through this

experience

side by side

and be who we are

without the emotional ride?

There is something inside of me

that makes me who I am

and I don't want to lose her

for the sake of a man

Who I am and what I want

and what I feel and do

are parts of me that come from me

and not an extension of you.

But if this is too much for you

this inability to possess or own

perhaps what is inside of YOU

needs to be alone

When you discover that part of you

that can live without the fear

You can contact that part of me

that would love to have you here.

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    • Cris A profile image

      Cris A 8 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      Ah the complexities and dynamics of the relationship between selves and the others. And yes, you have to be whole first before you can be a part of another. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing ;D

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Very insightful, loved it through.

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      Moonchild60 8 years ago

      Cris A & Randy - Thank you very much for your nice comments. They are much appreciated.

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      Disturbia 8 years ago

      This is lovely.

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      Moonchild60 8 years ago

      Thank you!!

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      goodfriendiam 7 years ago

      This is beautiful, and oh so true. Thank you, for sharing this, not because you NEEDED to, but because YOU wanted too. Denys

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      Moonchild60 7 years ago

      Dear Denys - Thank you very much and it was cute how you put that....

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      Rob Welsh 7 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

      Wow...

      "Who I am and what I want

      and what I feel and do

      are parts of me that come from me

      and not an extension of you."

      Spoken like the Scorpio I am... Heartfelt poem; I hope your words did not fall on unwise ears. Thank you for this.

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      Moonchild60 7 years ago

      You are very welcome PearlDiver...Scorpio ha? Good to know...

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      loua 7 years ago from Elsewhere, visiting Earth ~ the segregated community planet

      Yours is much more poetic;but this is a succinct ~ Individuality is a personal mode of self that is at our core... Others wish to own it more to embellish their worth without success for it belongs not to them but in the thought of only one the self of its resident individual...

      Very thought provoking and a rightful concern...

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      Moonchild60 7 years ago

      I agree completely. I may have been more poetic but you certainly said it far more intellectually than I ever could.

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      This is lovely Moony. Another piece of you heart revealed with such beauty. Does he know, does he share and comply with your sentiment? 'And n o one needs another To complete their soul?'

      I do, I will always need love and where else to obtain it to complete my soul?

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      Moonchild60 7 years ago

      Thank you Ralwus! I have no idea if he knows or not, I think he does and I think he does share my sentiments. I also will always need love, I think we all do, but I am not sure it's completes our souls, perhaps this is a forum we should start and ask around...?

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      Leighandrew 7 years ago from USA

      Very enjoyable !

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      Moonchild60 7 years ago

      Thank you Leighandrew - And thank you so much for stopping by and taking the time to read my hub. It is much appreciated.

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      Sherbet Penny 7 years ago from Galway, Ireland.

      Strong writing from the heart, very expressive and moving, nice.

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      Moonchild60 7 years ago

      Hi Sherbet - Thank you very much for your wonderful compliment. I very much appreciate that you recognize where my writing is coming from. : )

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      The original Eman 7 years ago from london

      This is very impressive i was glad i found this and i cant wait to read more of your stuff be sure to check out my page and let me know what you think thanks

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