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A Surprise Gift Basket Has Arrived On your Doorstep For You

Updated on August 22, 2010

I Can't Believe This Is For Me

It has your name on it in bold letters

There is no mistake

The ribbon is the biggest I have ever seen

It is a big bow made of shiny silk

I am sure you can't wait to open it

What is the special occasion you might wonder ?

Just because you are so special isn't that enough

As you open it

It is is a surprise to stir the mind

It opens your eyes to a vision of harmony in motion

It is best shared by family and friends

Where it can iive in every heart it mends

There is a trick to it you see

To use it everyday without question

You wonder how I could  fill so many thoughts in one basket

I encourage others to see all it is worth

When you first opened it you felt the exhilaration of your favorite bands performing live

Soon you wanted to join in and quickly dance up a storm

Taking each thought and making it yours

Each carrying a different melody of their own

You feel the rush overtake you

Still dancing to the beat and when you think you have heard it all

Colors come flying at you one by one

As they flash before your head

They keep changing from Green to a tourquise blue

Then to a fire engine red and to a light purple and a bright orange

They are simultaneously connected to your thoughts and you create them magically

With a puff of white smoke

You see my thoughts combine with your thoughts in a color blast combination that overwhelms all your senses

They keep colliding and create new energy of life

As new thoughts emerge

Life is changed for the better once more

So I leave you with one happy day to remember

It can be brought back anytime

With a tug of the bow 


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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Joy56 Everyone once in awhile one basket gets banged around and doesn't work.Another one is on its way.Enjoy your new found happiness. Keith Sutherland Like you I have to keep trying under all circumstances.Thank you so much.

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      Keith Sutherland 7 years ago

      Nice piece, thanks for sharing

    • Joy56 profile image

      Joy56 7 years ago

      any more gifts on their way.

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      Joy56 7 years ago

      i found the basket i undid the ribbon, fireworks went off, then there was silence,

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      Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

      Thank you. you are so right.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      PoeticColor22 Just one wish of many to keep you positively happy forever.Thank you and I hope the possiblities keep flowing.

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      poeticColor22 7 years ago from The Coast

      Thoughtful, intreaguing, questioning. Splindid work. A open ended riddle with many possibilities. Brava