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A poem about a crazed woman.

Updated on April 17, 2015

This is the story

This is a story of which I'll tell,

of a woman who has gone

to hell.

The man

She was of good virtue,

to which I know.

But she meet this man,

and let them go.

Abuse

He used her,

abused her.

And when he was through.

It was only than she realized

his love was un-true.

The Knife

She took a knife,

held it to his head.

Said make me your wife!

Or you'll be dead!

Jail

Alone in jail,

Is where she stayed.

With bugs and roaches,

Is where she laid.

The Noose

She made a noose

and tightened it tight,

Wrapped around the ceiling pipe.

She jumped with all her might.

The Note

The next day they found her,

hung and dead.

There was a letter,

found by her bed.

What it said.

I loved you,

worshipped you

and you tossed me away.

I sent you to hell,

to my dismay.

Final Redemption

Death for you was not enough,

being in jail is just a bluff.

I am coming to get you

and haunt you so.

I will see you in hell!

And never let you go!

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    • lisavanvorst profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa VanVorst 

      3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you. That was exactly my purpose when writing it.

    • lisavanvorst profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa VanVorst 

      3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you Wissam. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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      Wissam Qawasmeh 

      3 years ago from Amman - Jordan

      Wow, this poem goes beyond description, this is stunning, amazing, spectacular, staggering, astounding, astonishing.

    • lisavanvorst profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa VanVorst 

      3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thanks Frank. Will publish some new stuff next week. Just enjoying reading everyone else's hubs for now. Have a Happy Memorial Day Weekend.

    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 

      3 years ago from Shelton

      just revisiting your crazy :)

    • lisavanvorst profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa VanVorst 

      3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank Flourish for reading this hub. Unfortunately something happens to the human brain and it makes people go crazy.

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      FlourishAnyway 

      3 years ago from USA

      I sure wish she hadn't turned self-destructive. I'm sure he wasn't worth the trouble.

    • lisavanvorst profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa VanVorst 

      3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you always and Larry for reading my hub. Stay tuned for more.

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      Larry Rankin 

      3 years ago from Oklahoma

      Nice flow.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow, hate has no boundaries..Sad piece. I like your rhyming style...

    • lisavanvorst profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa VanVorst 

      3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you bigi1969. I am in a writing mood of deep, dark and despair. Stay tuned for my writing has taken a turn on the dark side.

    • lisavanvorst profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa VanVorst 

      3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you Jodah. Yes I am writing from my deep dark side. Stay tuned there will be more.

    • lisavanvorst profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa VanVorst 

      3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thanks Frank. The sad thing about this poem is somewhere it can be true to its word.

    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 

      3 years ago from Shelton

      wow, this poem knows its way around crazy.. awesome ..

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      John Marshall 

      3 years ago from glasgow

      Amazing poem,couldn't stop reading it.enthralling from start to finish.

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      John Hansen 

      3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Wow Lisa, this was dark and gloomy. It seems there is a darker theme spreading through Hub Pages at the moment which I myself have found my writing straying to as well. Maybe there's a message in all of this. That being said I enjoyed this poem immensely. Thank you for sharing, voted up.

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