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Updated on September 5, 2011


I can't close my eyes

and not see you

i can't disguise

if my feelings are true

When you hold me close and tight

you make everything seem so right

Yet there is something deep inside

that makes me want to run and hide

This feeling that you give to me

no one else could ever see

You came into my life from the black

and pulled the knife from my back

I'm so afraid to just let go

so hard to let my feelings show

Sometimes i wish you were alone

so i could call you on the phone

I don't know if things will ever be this way

but i become more attached day after day.



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  • IN2Deep profile image

    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    Ghost32---Thank You! Sometimes things are taken away from us so we can have something better..I am often amazed when I read my poems again- after years gone by..Everything happens for a reason They say--

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    Ghost32 7 years ago

    My wife could have written this, comparing our hooked-at-the-hip situation with her previous marriage (from which she was booted after a 20+ year run). Voted Up, Beautiful, and Awesome.

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    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    Thank You! So many more to post.Posted 23 in two days--didn't realize-sharing them-- would be such a positive way to just let it all go.Sometimes i think we hold on to things for so long and never realize how much it holds us back..

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    kirutaye 7 years ago from London, UK

    Nice poem. Well written. Keep them coming.

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    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    thank you!

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    kookoo88 7 years ago from Cripple Creek

    very intriguing poem.