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Updated on March 28, 2011

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I Said


I said that I loved you

you were so very kind.

but, I didn't know

love was so blind.


I said that I needed you

everyday and all night

but, I didn't know

If i let go, I'd be alright.


I said you were the only

you made me feel nice

but, I didn't know

I was really just lonely.


I said I couldn't live

If I didn't have you

but, I didn't know

you had nothing to give.


I said you were wrong

for leading me on

but I didn't know

you were making me strong


I said so much

I said my words were true

buy, I didn't know

I was better off without you

I said a lot

I said it to you

somehow I forgot

as I got over you.

VLH 01/08/11




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  • IN2Deep profile image

    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    Yes a Little more positive---But my original plan was--To

    write something off my usual subject ..Like um maybe

    " I watched the trees shiver-as the leaves danced down below.Expecting a delivery- a fresh blanket of snow"....Maybe I can do it know...I'm gonna try..Thank you! For reading,comenting and giving me that inspiration..

  • Rhonda Waits profile image

    Rhonda Musch 7 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    This was different but beautiful. Thanks for writing it.

  • IN2Deep profile image

    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    thank you! Extinct Soul--As I was trying to write about something totally different--I thought about all I had already written--and the things I said and felt at that time--and I realized--At that time I felt-I could never move on-I was crushed ect..But looking back now- I realized-I could let go-In all of those relationships-I Loved-I got in 2 Deep -I held on too long-I Hurt--but, It was all part of the process to get me where I am today---At Peace- and holding on a gently-- and knowing--my heart was able to heal--Life Does go on..

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    Extinct Soul 7 years ago from 14°35'N 121°0'E

    :) thank you for sharing this poem..It made me realized a lot of things while I'm reading it..tnx!