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I Said
I said that I loved you
you were so very kind.
but, I didn't know
love was so blind.
I said that I needed you
everyday and all night
but, I didn't know
If i let go, I'd be alright.
I said you were the only
you made me feel nice
but, I didn't know
I was really just lonely.
I said I couldn't live
If I didn't have you
but, I didn't know
you had nothing to give.
I said you were wrong
for leading me on
but I didn't know
you were making me strong
I said so much
I said my words were true
buy, I didn't know
I was better off without you
I said a lot
I said it to you
somehow I forgot
as I got over you.
VLH 01/08/11
Comments
- Author
Yes a Little more positive---But my original plan was--To
write something off my usual subject ..Like um maybe
" I watched the trees shiver-as the leaves danced down below.Expecting a delivery- a fresh blanket of snow"....Maybe I can do it know...I'm gonna try..Thank you! For reading,comenting and giving me that inspiration..
This was different but beautiful. Thanks for writing it.
- Author
thank you! Extinct Soul--As I was trying to write about something totally different--I thought about all I had already written--and the things I said and felt at that time--and I realized--At that time I felt-I could never move on-I was crushed ect..But looking back now- I realized-I could let go-In all of those relationships-I Loved-I got in 2 Deep -I held on too long-I Hurt--but, It was all part of the process to get me where I am today---At Peace- and holding on a gently-- and knowing--my heart was able to heal--Life Does go on..
:) thank you for sharing this poem..It made me realized a lot of things while I'm reading it..tnx!
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