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I Miss You So...

Updated on April 5, 2012

When your heart breaks does it make a noise~ if no one is listening ? ~ Cleaner 3


You have taken my love

Wow, is this where I must start

When you said.. we can't stay together.

for now... we must part

after you had.... taken my heart


It all started out so innocently

my Poetry.. was our only link

now I cannot write Poetry

now... I can hardly think.


I miss you....I love you....

those words.. are all I want to say.

but no words come from you

except... "there is too much pain"


I want to be with you

but with words... we only play

You say I'm sorry

but, " you must stay away"...


You write... that you can't come up

with the "right words for me"

I know the feelings are there

you just don't want to let me see


I know he came between us

now, " you shouldn't and you can't "

are the words that I don't want to I hear

so only with my poetry... can I rant


To pretend everything is normal

It's so painful... oh, I sure do know

it hurts me deep inside, too

try to take away the pain.. it won't go


I miss you , I love you

is all... I want to say

but all I hear from you...

is " that I must stay away ".....













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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      I only have 2 words for this one Michael - beautiful and painful...

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      laurathegentleman 5 years ago from Chapel Hill, NC

      Katrine is right - beautiful and painful indeed. I see the raw emotion. You should know that the woman who did this to you must be hurting somewhere, too. Starcrossed lovers who can't be together - it's a terrible thing.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Karine, thanks for your comments.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Your words echo heart ache and I hope it soon goes away. Beautiful poem.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Laura, yes i wrote this from my inner self . I wanted to express my self without hurting anybodys feelings. it was a very personal thing that I and she realize it must be said. We both hurt. but we will move on, knowing that we both still love each other. thanks for commenting and your support.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is so sad. You open your heart beautifully...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ruby, thank you for your visit. You have seen my heart.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Wow, this says a lot in such a short space. I know the pain of missing someone and it seems like it will break your heart. Your photos enhance the poem and are great visuals to the hub. Thanks for sharing. Beautiful!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      teaches, thank you for reading my heart felt love poem of longing for an answer. it's like Laura says Starcrossed love is terrible but sometimes to have loved and lost is better than not to have loved at all.

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      I don't know if you write this because it's personal, and if it is, you have gained from this loss. Your heart, though bruised, has a great capacity to love. And love holds any weight, faces any doubt, and last through any trial.

      Expressively written. Voted up and beautiful

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ann, thank you for taking the time to visit

      I know that you have busy with your poetry challenge.

      with sweet, cute, honeys like you watching out for me I will be alright.

      Love

      Michael

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Michael, you are welcome. I followed up on the tip you gave me, and three people have used my poems on another site. I am going to look into it. I guess it's a good thing, I don't know. It only accepts quality...'it says.' Anyway, thanks for alerting me. AD

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      love ya, my cutie, i don't know if they stole mine. my poetry isn't good enough , so I don't have to worry. it would just make them cry anyway.

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      Lady_Tenaz 5 years ago

      This was great! I love how you manipulate the verse and you do it your way...everyone has their own style and yours is truly unique!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My bautiful Lady,thank you for your comments. to get praise from you is special.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      Hmmm...Another stunning Ode to ? Michael, if this is about your life - i must agree with her now.lol. While getting on one's knees and stating one's case is always admirable even sexy - once - ongoing begging becomes...well...difficult..LOL. Somehow, i think you'll recover..love your poetry - love you!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My poems of broken hearts are to all the women who I have fallen in love with and then we had to part, why, Being a woman , you should know why? now you love me , will you also break my heart, like the beautys that were before you? LOL. I don't want to write of how a beauty like you had broken my fragile heart. so please be tender with me for you know I love you....

      Michael

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      Oh wow Michael-This poem drips with pain and sadness and I LOVE IT! One thing I like about your writing is that so much of you comes out in it. You wear your heart on your sleeve and I think that's a beautiful thing. Your capacity for love is enormous and any woman that knows you should know this and feel blessed. We've all had our hearts broken at some time in our life and I think it's good for the soul. Here's to knowing love, even past love.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My sweet Twin, thank you for visiting my hub and leaving a comment. I appreciate the support and it's always good to have a beautiful woman visit. We do know love don't we. maybe we are triplets?

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      oh, so sad, but i had that same feeling a week ago...tsk tsk...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My lovely Raci, those feelings come and they go, we move on but always keep them near. thanks for the comments

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      I just wanted to say it's heart-breakingly beautiful...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Max, thanks for you comments. I see you have become a fan of mine, and I am fan of yours.

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