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Sometimes i JUST feel to fly AWAY

Updated on April 24, 2015

Oh yeah sometimes I feel to fly

high above those fluffy clouds

and just disappear in the blue sky.

It will be such a relief to feel

all my troubles and sorrows

just melt away.


I wonder many times should I

run or should I stay and bare it all?

How to know which is right

and which is wrong? When I

hear two voices all the time?


One telling me don’t run

from your troubles my

dear. I will take away all

your gloominess so that you

won’t despair.


The other one

say run run run or fly fly

fly don’t you see that troubles

never passes you by

Sometimes I listen to the right

voice and feel so joyful and lifted

up.


Then I would listen to the one

that wants me to run from my woes.

When truly I shouldn’t listen to

him for he is my biggest foe.


That makes me sin in thoughts

words and deeds, Then he comes

around in my head seems as though

he’s trying to wrap me in his thread

telling me so blatantly that Christ

doesn’t love me. If I cannot see

how I live in misery?


That’s the way I feel at times,

but I’d trust GOD, Satan I’d

let you know my joy, my peace

you shan’t steal on this there

is absolutely no deal. I beg you

please don’t even appeal.........



Originally written 2011

© 2013 Joanna Chandler

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Just laugh in that old devil's face for he never gives up on any of us! His time is coming to an end and ours will soon just be beginning. Hope you are well!

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      kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Nice poem, Joanna! Just listen to the right voice. It's worth it!

      Joelle

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      I am alright hardly hearing from you, that mean things nice on your end . Email me keep me updated

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      Thanks kidscraft :)

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      I like the I feel to fly.. kinda of magical and spiritual at the same time loved it Lady :)

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Interestingly crafted poem of the sides of temptation.

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      Yeah Frank these days I wish I had wings like an eagle to pierce through the sky this world is getting to disgusting to survive in may God come quickly.

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      Thanks theater girl my dear.

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      Kamalesh050 3 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Beautiful and Interesting. Voted Up.

      Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi Kamal thank you so much for your comment i appreciate it. I've been on a mini vacation so now got a chance to respond.

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      Tammy 3 years ago from North Carolina

      You really captured the inner turmoil of being human. Very touching!

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      Thank you Tammy my dear pleasant night to you :)

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      Audrey Hunt 2 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Your poem swims in emotion. Well done and glad I had an opportunity to read it. Than you.

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      Sam Deal 2 years ago from Earth

      I feel to fly works for me - it sounds just magical enough to make a strong poem.

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      Joanna Chandler 2 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hello vocalcoach thanks very much :)

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      Joanna Chandler 2 years ago from On planet Earth

      Dealforaliving i am so glad that you can relate to my poem.

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