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The Last Goodbye-Poem

Updated on April 10, 2012

The Last Goodbye

 

The last time that I'll say hello

and yes, the last goodbye

you don't know what I'm feeling

I wont let you see me cry.

 

The times we had

the good the bad

all the confusion

that makes me so sad.

 

Things you said

to make me feel

just infatuation

It was not real.

 

I cant close my eyes

I don't want to see

I can't believe you

I don't want to try.

 

I'm walking away

I'm hurting to much

I don't need to feel

I don't need to touch.

I don't need a friend

to make me feel good

you never meant those words

I guess you never could.

VLH 2003

 

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    IN2Deep 6 years ago

    Agreed gothic poet:)

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    gothicpoet 6 years ago

    love is natural and not meant to be shameful

    keep that in mind

    i just had that experience, of keeping me a secret and ashamed to such a degree they blogged lies and a forum posting then whine their faces off afterwards

    love is natural and not mean to be ashamed

    if you feel ashamed you never loved her.,.

    so saying goodbye is appropriate

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    gothicpoet 6 years ago

    yeah great poem good for you about the walking away, it was never love you felt then..

    those sorts are easier to move along from..when it was superficial to begin with and not worth solving your own problems to win the love that is earned and worth having

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    IN2Deep 6 years ago

    *cracknutcase :)thank you!

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    Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

    Beautiful poem :)

    Thanks for sharing