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11:11 pm Thoughts
~11:11 PM Thoughts~
I do not fear the fear of falling
And I will overdose on this feeling
I love this rush
I love the desire burning inside
I won’t…I can’t go back.
Out of time, I fear
Spacing my options, consistently pushing
It’s a frustration feeling to do
But I am hungry for change
Being right back there
No!
I will be so cold
You need me, the only thing I want
Thoughts seem to be cloudy but so clear
I am hungry for change…
We may never know what we may do
With truth, I am out of my mind
I want to travel to a place no one’s knows
What if I end up right where I was before?
I will overdose on this feeling
I do not fear the fear of falling, it’s time…
I’m gone at 11:11 pm
Comments
- Author
Yes I see. I wear it for basketball. And every time I see the number I have a good feeling.
It's my favorite number too. I see it all the time after my father passed away at 1:11AM. His birthday was on January 11. I happen to look at the clock at 11:11 or 1:11-I see license plates with ones in it, etc, etc...
- Author
Thank you I appreciate that and yes 11 is my favorite number as well.
I had to vote up and hit all buttons except funny on this poem. I really like how you work through so much in your writing. The emotions and thoughts seem to walk you through the pain. Well penned Dari. P.S. I find it very interesting that your poem was written at 11:11. This is a very spiritual number.
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