The War 2014
Short-lived ambition and dreams leave me wondering what could be.
Our burdens and sorrows get all the emotion from our hearts while are love drifts apart.
When we strike against the evil in the world they will strike back and pain will ground us all.
Those for war will drop not a tear for in there life nothing will compare.
For the ones that begged for it to stop have nothing left but a broken heart.
I see you laughing and clapping for this war but ask yourself what is all this for.
As I close this thought of the day please I beg you just hit your knees and pray.
©2014 CLAH
Comments
I Love It !
Beautifully written
This is good
Wonderful poem about the war, so true
Hmmmm nice nice
Awesome
Lovely
I like this one as well.
Your good at this maybe you could be great one day ..
Nice...
Awesome keep it up
Thanks for posting this work Crystal... We should be at the point where no one accepts war as a solution, but sadly we do not understand this yet.
I like the emotion you share in your work.
Crystal I feel that all of us cannot understand the reasons for any war. There never is and never would be if people wake up to themselves!thank you for your sharing.
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Thank you all I poured my heart into this.
I agree with you crystal. War isn't a pretty thing or something to clap about because in the end nothing but broken hearts are left.
what a beautiful message i loved it.
This is a beautiful message on how war affects our lives. If only it were not a part of our lives today.
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