6 X 5
bent
| light
| pocketed
| fills
| lint
|
tips
| slant
| stitched
| clean
| again
|
held
| firmly
| grey
| hand
| slackens
|
sway
| pushes
| threads
| buttoned
| tied
|
touches
| find
| picked
| red
| threads
|
earth
| nights
| loosened
| dance
| free
|
© 2016 Audrey Howitt
Comments
Unique. To be read, vertically or horizontally? A new format to me.
I loved your work--good going!
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Thank you ArtDiva and juneaukid! Have fun finding new ways to read this one--I had fun writing it--
The image is powerful. The style is artistic and creative. Alas! I've met my match! Much Love.
Audrey, is this a form of haiku? Really creative.
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Thank you manatita! ArtDiva--I fear this not a form at all really, just me playing around
An interesting concept, Audrey. We have to keep trying new things. Well done.
What a unique and interesting hub! Never seen something like this. Only a creative mind can think like this. Your title itself makes one curious .
Well done and thanks for sharing!
Hello Audrey - This is so complex. So many things can be read into it. It is a puzzle, as is all poetry.
This is, simply, the single-most unique piece of writing I've ever seen.
The title alone caught my attention. Just goes to show what a unique title can do. Then I was stunned when I saw the poem AND the graphic. Have never seen or even thought of anything like that. Unique. Well done.
Stitched threads, lent free, held hand slackens, light fills earth. This BLOWS my mind. Whoa!
There has to be a "first," for a "second" to appear!
Now you've done it...you've out done yourself! Wonderful!
The image grabbed my attention before I even began reading! But I'm a sucker for abstract sometimes. The poem. . I don't know what to make of that. I am curious what inspired this piece? So complicated, yet simple. Amazing!
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Thank you John! Not sure that it works, but I like the idea of it
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Thank you Chitrangada!
a new experience for me....new is good....thanks for opening new pockets in my brain :D
Angels are on the way ps
I was eager to know what 6*5 is and landed on this amazing thing. A new thing to me. Is it some kind of word puzzle that you created using the 6 line, 5 column table and created some fantastic lyrical poetry and an artistic image also? Very great to see.
This shows we do not need a great many words to say something great.
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Tis a puzzlement Mike! Thank you!
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Just goofing around really--wanting my creative juices to flow again--Thank you Bill!
different.. yeah.. different
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Thank you for reading this one and for your kind words DreamerMeg
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Well I hope that is a good thing Ruby!! Thank you!
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Thank you quicksand!
An interesting piece of creativity at its best. I found many ways to read and enjoyed the whole experience.
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Thank you Audrey!
unique, cutting edge
Most creative poetry.
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Sometimes different is good--and sometimes it is just different--hope this was different in a good way for you Frank!
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Thank you Flourish!
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Thank you Rasma!
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Thank you Shanmarie! I was playing around in one of my notebooks and that gave birth to this piece--
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Thank you Vellur!
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And new pockets in my brain as well--Thank you pstraubie48
Now, that took some good thought!
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Thank you Deb!
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Thank you Jay!
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Thank you Venkatachari!
Now that was different! still reading the possibilities! :)
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It is fun I think--it was fun to write!
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Thank you Nell!
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