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6 X 5
bent
| light
| pocketed
| fills
| lint
|
tips
| slant
| stitched
| clean
| again
|
held
| firmly
| grey
| hand
| slackens
|
sway
| pushes
| threads
| buttoned
| tied
|
touches
| find
| picked
| red
| threads
|
earth
| nights
| loosened
| dance
| free
|
© 2016 Audrey Howitt
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Thank you Nell!
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It is fun I think--it was fun to write!
Now that was different! still reading the possibilities! :)
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Thank you Venkatachari!
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Thank you Jay!
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Thank you Deb!
Now, that took some good thought!
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And new pockets in my brain as well--Thank you pstraubie48
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Thank you Vellur!
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Thank you Shanmarie! I was playing around in one of my notebooks and that gave birth to this piece--
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Thank you Rasma!
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Sometimes different is good--and sometimes it is just different--hope this was different in a good way for you Frank!
Most creative poetry.
unique, cutting edge
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Thank you Audrey!
An interesting piece of creativity at its best. I found many ways to read and enjoyed the whole experience.
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Thank you quicksand!
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Well I hope that is a good thing Ruby!! Thank you!
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Thank you for reading this one and for your kind words DreamerMeg
different.. yeah.. different
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Just goofing around really--wanting my creative juices to flow again--Thank you Bill!
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Tis a puzzlement Mike! Thank you!
This shows we do not need a great many words to say something great.
I was eager to know what 6*5 is and landed on this amazing thing. A new thing to me. Is it some kind of word puzzle that you created using the 6 line, 5 column table and created some fantastic lyrical poetry and an artistic image also? Very great to see.
a new experience for me....new is good....thanks for opening new pockets in my brain :D
Angels are on the way ps
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Thank you Chitrangada!
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Thank you John! Not sure that it works, but I like the idea of it
The image grabbed my attention before I even began reading! But I'm a sucker for abstract sometimes. The poem. . I don't know what to make of that. I am curious what inspired this piece? So complicated, yet simple. Amazing!
Now you've done it...you've out done yourself! Wonderful!
There has to be a "first," for a "second" to appear!
Stitched threads, lent free, held hand slackens, light fills earth. This BLOWS my mind. Whoa!
The title alone caught my attention. Just goes to show what a unique title can do. Then I was stunned when I saw the poem AND the graphic. Have never seen or even thought of anything like that. Unique. Well done.
This is, simply, the single-most unique piece of writing I've ever seen.
Hello Audrey - This is so complex. So many things can be read into it. It is a puzzle, as is all poetry.
What a unique and interesting hub! Never seen something like this. Only a creative mind can think like this. Your title itself makes one curious .
Well done and thanks for sharing!
An interesting concept, Audrey. We have to keep trying new things. Well done.
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Thank you manatita! ArtDiva--I fear this not a form at all really, just me playing around
Audrey, is this a form of haiku? Really creative.
The image is powerful. The style is artistic and creative. Alas! I've met my match! Much Love.
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Thank you ArtDiva and juneaukid! Have fun finding new ways to read this one--I had fun writing it--
I loved your work--good going!
Unique. To be read, vertically or horizontally? A new format to me.
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