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6 X 5

Updated on August 13, 2016
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Audrey is a poet, classical singer and voice teacher, recovering attorney and licensed psychotherapist.

I made this image on a free artwork program online--using Flame Painter
I made this image on a free artwork program online--using Flame Painter | Source
 
 
 
 
 
bent
light
pocketed
fills
lint
tips
slant
stitched
clean
again
held
firmly
grey
hand
slackens
sway
pushes
threads
buttoned
tied
touches
find
picked
red
threads
earth
nights
loosened
dance
free

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      Audrey Howitt 7 months ago from California

      Thank you Nell!

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      Audrey Howitt 7 months ago from California

      It is fun I think--it was fun to write!

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      Nell Rose 7 months ago from England

      Now that was different! still reading the possibilities! :)

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      Audrey Howitt 8 months ago from California

      Thank you Venkatachari!

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      Audrey Howitt 8 months ago from California

      Thank you Jay!

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      Audrey Howitt 8 months ago from California

      Thank you Deb!

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      Deb Hirt 13 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Now, that took some good thought!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      And new pockets in my brain as well--Thank you pstraubie48

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you Vellur!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you Shanmarie! I was playing around in one of my notebooks and that gave birth to this piece--

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you Rasma!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Sometimes different is good--and sometimes it is just different--hope this was different in a good way for you Frank!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 14 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Most creative poetry.

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      FlourishAnyway 14 months ago from USA

      unique, cutting edge

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you Audrey!

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      Nithya Venkat 14 months ago from Dubai

      An interesting piece of creativity at its best. I found many ways to read and enjoyed the whole experience.

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you quicksand!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Well I hope that is a good thing Ruby!! Thank you!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you for reading this one and for your kind words DreamerMeg

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      Frank Atanacio 14 months ago from Shelton

      different.. yeah.. different

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Just goofing around really--wanting my creative juices to flow again--Thank you Bill!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Tis a puzzlement Mike! Thank you!

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      Jay C OBrien 14 months ago from Houston, TX USA

      This shows we do not need a great many words to say something great.

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      Venkatachari M 14 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      I was eager to know what 6*5 is and landed on this amazing thing. A new thing to me. Is it some kind of word puzzle that you created using the 6 line, 5 column table and created some fantastic lyrical poetry and an artistic image also? Very great to see.

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      Patricia Scott 14 months ago from sunny Florida

      a new experience for me....new is good....thanks for opening new pockets in my brain :D

      Angels are on the way ps

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you Chitrangada!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you John! Not sure that it works, but I like the idea of it

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      shanmarie 14 months ago

      The image grabbed my attention before I even began reading! But I'm a sucker for abstract sometimes. The poem. . I don't know what to make of that. I am curious what inspired this piece? So complicated, yet simple. Amazing!

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      Audrey Hunt 14 months ago from Nashville Tn.

      Now you've done it...you've out done yourself! Wonderful!

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      quicksand 14 months ago

      There has to be a "first," for a "second" to appear!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 14 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Stitched threads, lent free, held hand slackens, light fills earth. This BLOWS my mind. Whoa!

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      DreamerMeg 14 months ago from Northern Ireland

      The title alone caught my attention. Just goes to show what a unique title can do. Then I was stunned when I saw the poem AND the graphic. Have never seen or even thought of anything like that. Unique. Well done.

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      Bill Holland 14 months ago from Olympia, WA

      This is, simply, the single-most unique piece of writing I've ever seen.

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      mckbirdbks 14 months ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello Audrey - This is so complex. So many things can be read into it. It is a puzzle, as is all poetry.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 14 months ago from New Delhi, India

      What a unique and interesting hub! Never seen something like this. Only a creative mind can think like this. Your title itself makes one curious .

      Well done and thanks for sharing!

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      John Hansen 14 months ago from Queensland Australia

      An interesting concept, Audrey. We have to keep trying new things. Well done.

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you manatita! ArtDiva--I fear this not a form at all really, just me playing around

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      ArtDiva 14 months ago

      Audrey, is this a form of haiku? Really creative.

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      The image is powerful. The style is artistic and creative. Alas! I've met my match! Much Love.

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you ArtDiva and juneaukid! Have fun finding new ways to read this one--I had fun writing it--

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      Richard Francis Fleck 14 months ago from Denver, Colorado

      I loved your work--good going!

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      ArtDiva 14 months ago

      Unique. To be read, vertically or horizontally? A new format to me.