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74 "You And I Are The Sum" - a poem.

Updated on May 27, 2013

One and One equals Two - a complete total.

You And I Are The Sum

Why you love me like you do I will never know,

I love you like there is no tomorrow.

Several times I have almost given up and moved on,

But your true love has always kept me from being gone.

No matter what happens in this life of ours,

I will be by your side whether hail, snow or showers.

You are the most important part of my life,

We will be together no matter what the strife.

We have waited so long for our time together to come,

When we add our love together, You and I are the sum.



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      Nithya Venkat 18 months ago from Dubai

      Beautifully expressed, voted up.

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      Saphyaire 2 years ago

      Really beautiful :)

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      Niquel Cozart 3 years ago from New Jersey suburb

      Beautiful and romantic poem. So warm and heartfelt. Thanks for sharing.

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      Greg Schweizer 3 years ago from Corona, California.

      Thank you Mark for the visit and the comment. Greg

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      Mark Tulin 3 years ago from Santa Barbara, California

      Can feel the strong emotional bond in your poem. Love is a little like Gorilla glue. The bond is nearly unbreakable. Thanks

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      Greg Schweizer 3 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Brenda, thank you so much for the compliment. Greg.

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      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      Beautiful poem. You express your feelings so eloquently.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Pleased to make your acquaintance on HP gregas ( Greg ), and trust that everything, on balance, is going well with you in life. Thank you for your generosity.

      The object of your love in your verse must consider herself happy indeed for being the proud recipient of such abundant affection - don't stop reminding her lol!

      All the Best from a chilly, rain-swept England.

      Romeo's Quill

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      Khalid Ahmed 4 years ago from Lucknow

      Gregas, you have very well expressed your feeling..Simply romantic.

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      Greg Schweizer 4 years ago from Corona, California.

      I want to thank all of you for your comments and appreciation of my poem. Greg

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      Really lovely poem. Very heartfelt words. I enjoyed reading this.

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      Anil 4 years ago from Kerala

      Nice nice super, we are expect more from you, thanks again.

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Who could ask for anything more? This would please any woman. ^

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      Audrey Hunt 4 years ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      So very lovely. You are both so blessed to have such a love for each other.

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      T. Clifton 4 years ago from Buffalo, Missouri

      You must know a very deep love. What a blessing. I don't think everyone does.

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      Kittymeowmeow 4 years ago from United States

      Quite a moving poem sir the art of romance is in your blood.

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      Siddharth 4 years ago from Jaipur

      A very nice poem sir


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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Just lovely. Your lady is lucky to have such a romantic in her life.

      Best Always,


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      thost 4 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      Very nice and sincere poem. Thank you for sharing.

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      picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      a poem of true love!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I love this!! True love is so wonderful, and it looks like you've found it..

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Wonderful and romantic sentiments.

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      Greg Schweizer 4 years ago from Corona, California.

      Thank you, I know she does and the total is beautiful. Greg

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      This poem is really beautiful and so romantic. I hope she appreciates it and the sum adds up.