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A LOVERS QUESTIONS...

Updated on November 21, 2010
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HOW DOES MY LOVE SEE ME NOW....by b. Malin

How does my Love see me now?

It's been a lot of years.

Lots of Laughs.

Some Tears.

Some Fears...

How does my Love see Me now?

I'm not that young girl anymore...

But he says he likes my style.

Our Lovemaking has a Rhythm.

A Rhythm all its own.

How does my Love see me now?

I look in the Mirror, I see,

My Maturity, My Wit...

My Smile Lines.

He says he doesn't mind a bit.

We are Best Friends...

Until the end of our Time.

How does my Love see me now?

Hopefully... always this way.

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      Why Thank You AHorseback...We always need to grow together in a good Relationship, so far so good!

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      ahorseback 6 years ago

      What a beautiful way to look at love , Nice writing.! awesome...:-}

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      Thank you acaetnna, for coming by and expressing your lovely comments and observation on this poem.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Simply beautiful. It takes something so simple like expressing in words on paper to make a man realise how precious you are to him. I loved this.

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      I always love hearing from you Erin, you are also a super lady. Thanks for stopping by.

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      Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland

      The seasons of a woman, how we change and grow. And how we wonder and hope these seasonings are appreciated and adored by the man we love and adore...obviously your gem appreciates all you are still becoming! What a beautiful way you have about you and such a lovely expression! Voted you up and of course, beautiful!

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      Well, well, a two shot from you...I just got back from family Turkey Day...and am now trying to catch up...Ditto, Ditto to you too!

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ...and you always always (that's two) make my day or night when you drop by and see me .......

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..write any way you want my friend - because everything you do or no matter how you do it is spectacular!!!!!

      I am no expert on poetry or even writing for that matter but I know what I like - and I always like what you do - and how you write it - ole!!!!!!

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      Thank you so much libby101...So Glad you stopped by.

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      libby101a 6 years ago from KY

      Beautiful!

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      Thank you Jaggedfrost and I take any compliment from you and say, glad you stopped by!

      richtwf, after my husband read this poem...he said, you know you are more beautiful now than when I first met you. He is my Man!

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      richtwf 6 years ago

      As we become older and our relationships age and mature, our loved ones should know us more and we hope that they love us just as much if not more than before. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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      Jaggedfrost 6 years ago

      It might be fun and interesting to break this one into stanzas every time you repeat your opening refrain. It was a sweet poem to read.