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A Little Love Poem

Updated on August 10, 2012
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Ill stop loving you,

When diamonds never sparkle & flowers never grow,

When thunder never echoes & rivers never flow,

When hearts no long wonder & hands are never held,

When smiles are only memories & hope is never felt,

When trees no longer blossom & the sun refuses to shine,

Ill never stop loving you untill the end of time.


Thank you for reading,

Lou x

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      No no,it s alright.it s natural and not that embarassing:)In the future,you will find yourself at ease exploring not only this but other taboos as well:)

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      L. Caulton (Author L.L.CAULTON) 4 years ago from barnsley, UK

      I can honnestly say, i have shocked my self :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      That chapter was perfect and so great.You are good at that field;)

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      L. Caulton (Author L.L.CAULTON) 4 years ago from barnsley, UK

      :) canot wait for ye input on it :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      I ll check it now

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      L. Caulton (Author L.L.CAULTON) 4 years ago from barnsley, UK

      Yay :) sent you the second to preview, I dont think im doing bad considering im not used to writing S e X scenes.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      I read it ,I liked it.It was great.Thumbs up:)

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      L. Caulton (Author L.L.CAULTON) 4 years ago from barnsley, UK

      It's the first draft so yeah it probably will :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Ok,I will see if it needs some finishing touches :)

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      L. Caulton (Author L.L.CAULTON) 4 years ago from barnsley, UK

      of course i will finish it, i'm just taking a small break from it, I have that many idea's i keep confusing me self so i'll have a break and then go back to it and hopefully finish it this time. I'm going to email a piece from my newest novel so you can preview it and tell me what you think to it so far :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      You mean you are not going to finish it?

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      L. Caulton (Author L.L.CAULTON) 4 years ago from barnsley, UK

      Don't worry about it hon, I've been busy writing more chapters to whisper's and I have also started another novel because that one is driving me crazy.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Sorry,Laura. I didnt read you for awhile.

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      L. Caulton (Author L.L.CAULTON) 4 years ago from barnsley, UK

      Glad you liked it James :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Beautiful as always.True love stop until the last flower dies.I voted up.

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      L. Caulton (Author L.L.CAULTON) 5 years ago from barnsley, UK

      Thanks lol ill change it. :)

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      Mohan Kumar 5 years ago from UK

      Just to point out that the title has a typo: Peom instead of Poem.

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      Mohan Kumar 5 years ago from UK

      Aw.. The sweet sentiments of love. Well expressed here, Lou. Eternity awaits for that sweet love.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      lush

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      To be in love is such a wonderful feeling..

      Beautifully expressed!

      Voted up