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A Most Defining Moment.

Updated on March 18, 2010

A Defining Moment.

What is it about
your first kiss,
that sets the

very atoms
of your entire

body whirling.

That everlasting

moment that
one can never forget,
as lips make

liquid contact
and the world

melts away,
with the

aching longing
to never

let it end.

Just let it

go on and on,
in a Siamese

but alas the

physical act
is over

far too soon.


it's beauty
clings to

one's soul,
as an emotional

marker that

generates smiles
even on the

faces of those

who are eighty.

A timeless

I often

puzzle over,
from a period

in my life
when I did not fit,
until the tabs

of our lips
joined together

in sweet bliss,
created a


of wonder.



Artistic Still Life.

© -MFB

Tattered jeans

and smooth

skinned knees
peep like

curious eyes

from the

worn out fabric.

Beauty can be

found in

the strangest

of places.



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    • Moulik Mistry profile image

      Moulik Mistry 8 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      I am always amazed by your writing skill...

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      seasoning 8 years ago

      glad you enjoyed your first kiss, i enjoyed the poem

    • SummerSteward profile image

      SummerSteward 8 years ago from Duluth MN

      What a wonderful memory you just encouraged in me! Thank you for your words.

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 8 years ago

      I remember my first kiss. We were so innocent. It was such a beautiful moment frozen in time- very much like when she ran off with the soccer team from Brazil!

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      MFB III 8 years ago from United States

      And I am quite flattered by your marvel, if not for readers I would be a mime on paper expressing nothing to anyone.

      thanks as always for stopping by.~~~MFB III

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      debugs 8 years ago from Odessey777, Umbris

      I marvel at your poetry.