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This Poem Sucks

Updated on July 13, 2012

With one foot over the side

of the tub and the other

stirring the luke warm water,

my big toe inches towards the

busy drain, both my sins and

accomplishments swirling

to a place I can only imagine

my fish would enjoy and I

wonder if this is the sort of

thing Bukowski meant when

he said that we should reward

ourselves with a candy-ass poem

now and again.


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      Annie Fenn 5 years ago from Australia

      This poem sure does suck!!! Maybe you could use that big toe as a plug and save the suck for a few moments longer!!! Love your words Darryl, love your humour!! My votes and sharing far and wide!!