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A Quick Poem Written for That Special Woman

Updated on March 25, 2011

I never would have thought

Not in a million years

My heart could be so taught

My head so filled with cheer

Not with such short time

It was nearly overnight

Yet was never out of line

Nor filled with any fright

When everything just falls

So perfectly into place

My excitement off the walls

Just to see your smiling face

Its so insane the way we are

Give it up? Not by far!


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      Greg Schweizer 6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi T, I know the feeling. I've had that feeling for the last 25 years about a special woman. Greg

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Oh young love, hold on to it tight. I really like this poem. I could feel your excitement! Welcome to HubPages.

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      flying_fish 6 years ago from GTA

      delightful!

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      Daisy Fabelo 6 years ago from miami beach

      so sweet now that is true love

      u understand the harship but in the end its the love for our partners that over power ...

      nice!!!!!

      n welcome to hub pages n thanx for the follow!!!!

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      Katerina 6 years ago

      WOW! This poem and the comments you made about how April has helped you took my breath away! I've been friends with April for a really long time and I'm so happy for her that she found someone who loves her so much. She's a great person and she's incredibly smart and compassionate, take good care of her. Always cherish her and you won't regret it! Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful poem!

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      Giovanna Sanguinetti 23 months ago from London UK

      My son is going through his very first love at the moment! He'll love to read this poem. It's touching. We could all do with spreading love around. I know, I'm sounding like a hippy, but it's true! Thanks for sharing your poem.

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      Sandeep Rathore 23 months ago from New Delhi

      I really like it when somebody shows love through a poem. Frankly speaking, it's really difficult to write a poem. Once I tried and ended up writing some clumsy lines. My girlfriend liked those lines and smiled, though. You wrote a good poem, indeed.

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      Don Colfax 23 months ago from Easton, Pennsylvania

      @Sandeep15r, Indeed it can be a challange - I think that's what really makes it fun. Keep trying at it my friend, I'm sure you've got some fantastic stuff hiding in that brain of yours!

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