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A SPRING b. Malin

Updated on March 9, 2011
Spring Flower...  Photo by Stephan
Spring Flower... Photo by Stephan


I'm once again Remembering a Different Time, Come join Me, on this journey.

I was alone that night, so I decided to take a walk with Brandy, my Enormous Furry Wonder Dog. It was a delightful Spring night. The kind that I had visualized in my Dreams and Fantasies...The kind that had sustained my Sanity through the long Winter months.

How quickly one forgets the cold nights, the heavy jackets, and the red runny noses...The quick walks to the end of the block, hoping the dog will take pity and hurry with his business, as you pray for No More Snow.

But tonight is different, it has become Spring! It overpowers me... Like an old Lover...The air is so clean and sweet smelling. I want it to last Forever this moment and my feelings. I feel like a Kid again, all shiny and new. I start to run, my hair blowing ever so slightly about my shoulders.

The Dog senses my Happiness as he runs Happily beside me. Then as if to show "Who's really the Boss"...he runs ahead of me, to wait patiently, panting, down the road by the Duck Pond. I have stopped running for my body is starting to feel sticky. But the air has a bit of a mist in it, which feels so good as it cools my shoulders.

I hug myself as I look up at the night time sky and the Beautiful Shimmering Stars that are shinning down on us ever so brightly. I called to Wonder Dog, who comes running with a Large Stick in his mouth, which he now drops gently at my feet...He knows that I know the routine, he has "Trained" Me well. I pick up his stick and throw it hard as I can. I smile as I watch him race past me to retrieve his new found Treasure.

We now turn onto our block, and my Wonder Dog disappears into some bushes, and comes out minus his stick, which he has safely hidden until tomorrow. "Come on Brandy" I yell, "I'll race you to the house". And we do, as the sounds and mysteries of the Spring Night, Sing their Happy Song.


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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      No I won't change my Style...It's my Style...Thanks Colin for Loving It...and a Big LOL to you as well!

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ....well ..... 'preamble' all you want b.malin - me love it! And don't change your style for no one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      My sister used to have a dog named "Dolly" and a close friend of mine, named her dog Dolly...You're Dolly must have been very "special" too. Thank you for enjoying Peg, and for all your Beautiful thoughts. LOL

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      Peg Cole 6 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      You've captured the joy of Wonder Dog forever here (may he rest in peace) and in our hearts. Spring really is a time of renewal and life. I found myself looking at pictures of my own furry Dolly today and remembering her joy. She had me trained quite well. Warm thoughts your way. xx Peg

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      Thank you Fssillady, so glad that you found this one so refreshing...Wonder Dog is no longer on this Earth, but will never be forgotten!

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      Kathi 6 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      Your words written down were as refreshing as a spring day! Happy thoughts to you and Wonder Dog!

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      I so appreciated your comment, that I was "Magical" Bbnix, well as your other thoughts...As writers and Poets it's music to our Ears when our Poems and thoughts are appreciated.

      I'm not sure I'm always writing from inside my mind...Nothing is ever really planned, I just go with my thoughts at that moment, unless it's an older piece that I want to up date...I also enjoy your Poems, and yes, we are very different in our styles Jaggedfrost.

      That's what I love about you Arb, your Humor!...and I feel honored that you liked this Poem and what it said to you.

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      arb 6 years ago from oregon

      Wonderfully done b. I think my favorite. I was there and I felt your spring, I almost went after the stick. Well done!

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      Jaggedfrost 6 years ago

      i know you have your style. i rather like it as a break from mine. i just would like to be able to get a little further inside your mind as it were with the substance of how you sense things when you are ruminating in the moment.

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      You are so magical b., I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this.

      These are the gift moments indeed. I find myself with you under the stars, and can't help but declare for you, a big spring time hug from another big furry friend...

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      BlueStar, I think you are right, the winter was just a bit too long...I wish you an early Spring, like tomorrow! Glad you enjoyed!

      Breakfastpops, no matter what our age, Spring always seems so Fresh and New with Wonderful Possibilities...Loved your Comments too.

      Genna East, if given the choice, I would choose Spring Year Round! Thanks so much for your rich and rewarding Thoughts and Compliments.

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      Thank you Fiddleman...You're right we do turn the Clocks ahead this weekend, thanks for reminding all of us...Yea, for SPRING!

      WillStarr, bet you could add a few good ones...Thanks for enjoying!

      Well Jaggedfrost any compliment from you is always appreciated...This is my style and you have yours.

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      Genna East 6 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      "Like an old Lover...The air is so clean and sweet smelling. I want it to last Forever..."

      Spring is my favorite season; it is seductive and full of promise, and your words remind me of its promise. Well done.

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      breakfastpop 6 years ago

      I love the first stirrings of spring. I am transported back to my bedroom when I was a teenager. The window is open, the curtains are blowing and life is filled with luscious possibilities. Voted up, awesome and beautiful.

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Nice one girlfriend, I think we must all have spring fever for which there is no cure lol

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      Jaggedfrost 6 years ago

      i wonder if you needed as much preamble as you did and whether a few more descriptives, sights and aromas might have strengthened this piece. It was a nice little write.

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      WillStarr 6 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Wow! All the sweet memories this invokes.

      Up and awesome.

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      Fiddleman 6 years ago

      Great hub and I can't believe we turn the clocks forward Sunday morning.

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      Hip, Hip, Hooray for Spring! Thanks Sally for enjoying my Tribute to Spring and my late, beloved Brandy.

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      Truckstop Sally 6 years ago

      Love it! What a great story, a great night, a great dog . . . Spring has sprung where I live. In the 70's today!!