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A Searching Heart.

Updated on May 5, 2013

My searching heart ached

reaching out in desperation

that knotted fear suspended

clinging to hope.........................

My searching heart ached

as I swirled in oblivion

where are you

my heart so pained..........................

My searching heart ached

cascading through bleak barriers

tears fall as icy dewdrops

you said you would wait................................

My searching heart ached

through curtains of cold mist

a gleam of hope so craved for

eyes piercing in tormented sight..........................

My searching heart ached

as waves of desperation

flowed through to my soul

so cold

so stark............................

My searching heart ached

but a vision from afar

flowing towards me

dare I believe................................

My searching heart no longer ached

my soul mate my true love

you waited for me;

two heart thus united as one...............................

A love so true

a love complete

formidable barriers of life overcome

two lovers calling

two hearts as one............................



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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Beautiful! Thank you for expressing it so well....up+ my friend and sharing!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much randi and here's wishing you a wonderful day.


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      JThomp42 4 years ago

      Beautiful Eddy!! Voted up, awesome, and shared.

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      Lisa J Warner 4 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      through curtains of cold mist


      Voted up and sharing!

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Eddy, I so love a happy ending!...simply beautiful.

      Up and awesome

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Beautiful love poem, Eddy! Thank you for sharing it!

      Just awesome :-)

      Have a nice Sunday!

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      Subhas 4 years ago from New Delhi, India

      Love is really beautiful if it is woven through feelings from heart. Simply great.

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      Lurana Brown 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Beautiful! I really like your writing style in this one. :-) ~Lurana

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      Shannon 4 years ago from Texas

      That's beautiful, Eddy! It reminds me now of a few I know that are still searching for their soulmates or waiting to be reunited with them.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Your a fantastic poet!! keep up the good work ,my chwaer !

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      Laura L Scotty 4 years ago from Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania

      Beautiful. You do need to correct the singular on "two heart united as one." Otherwise this is brilliantly beautiful.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Oh, Eddy I'm so glad this had a happy ending! When I first started reading it reminded me of your so very sad poetry when I first started following you. I've seen you grow so much!

      Thank Dai for bringing this precious being called Eddy back to the beautiful soul that she is!

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago beautifully woven - i could almost see mr perfect for YOU emerging from the mist and your fears subsiding!!

      gorgeous Eddy - not surprisingly!

      voting up and sharing on...

      so glad you're back - i did miss you!

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      Annie Miller 4 years ago from Wichita Falls, Texas

      This is so beautiful, Eddy. Thank you.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful! Love is in the air...Thank you Eddy

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      Awesome!!! I felt this way sweet love carried us away.

      This is one of your best, I do believe, Eddy.

      Thank you for so wonderfully sharing such a wonderfully expressed sentiment. :) ps

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      I really loved this beautiful write here! Excellent!

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      Perhaps not one day can be finer than seeing that one perfect ,"real "love emerge from the shadows of our dought . And yet we do gain so much from suffering alone , no ? You my dear are one of those bursts of soul !, Of Passion! , and of the best of all of us !......Ed

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      mikielikie 4 years ago from Texas

      Loved this!! Well done!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      eddy the words just still me... wow I loved it :)

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A really beautiful poem, Eddy. Enjoyed reading it immensely.

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      Better Emotions 4 years ago

      Beautiful poem. Lovely expressions of pain and a lovely end too.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Very very impressive. I especially like your coda idea. thank you

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Just lovely Eddy. So romantic. Passing this on.

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      gaplumber 4 years ago

      Beautiful Eddy.

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      Anna Haven 4 years ago from Scotland

      I liked the repetition of 'searching heart', the happy ending reminded me of a fairytale :) Beautiful write.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much to

























      for each and every wonderful comment. Each one so greatly appreciated and here's to so many more for us all to share on here.


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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      When love comes back...this, as always is beautiful Eddy. You just know what to write and it comes out beautiful.

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Eddy, what a beautiful love poem, the words so perfectly placed. Jamie

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Nothing better than when a true love comes along...

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much Mary enjoy your day.


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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you also Jamie.


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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you as always Deb.


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      Charu Bhatnagar 4 years ago from India

      This is simply pure and beautiful. :-) Feelings expressed so beautifully as always. :-) Thank you.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Oh thank you so much Charu for your comment .As always it is so greatly appreciated. Have a great day.


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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      Awww...I loved this one. Ends happy, with the one finding true love in their soulmate. Thank you for this one, Eiddy! : )

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much dreamseeker2 ;this comment so appreciated.

      Enjoy your day.


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      Rolly A Chabot 4 years ago from Alberta Canada

      Morning Eddy.... love this and it is so filled with lines we have all yearned for. You are so very gifted Eddy. Promise to never stop creating such wonderful hubs and photos.... spectacular...

      Hugs, Love and Blessings

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Hi Rolly and thank you so much for this wonderful comment it is so appreciated and no I shall never stop writing anymore it is as much a part of me as breathing by now.

      Here's to wishing you a wonderful day my dear friend.


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      stars439 4 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      This is very nice, and beautiful. Happy Mothers Day cherished heart. You will always be precious to us all. You have so many gifts God gave you. God Bless You, and you're loved ones.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Hi stars thank you so much for your kind and caring comment.

      It means so much and here's to so amny more hubs for us both to share on here.


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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      So beautiful and happy ending :) God bless you!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you rdsparrowriter and enjoy your day.


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      Greensleeves Hubs 4 years ago from Essex, UK

      Eddy; Very well written and poignant poem which I thought would have a sad ending - but as I prefer happy endings, it was good to read the last two verses! I had a searching heart for much of my life so it was easy to identify with that sentiment. Voted up/beautiful. Alun

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much Alun your comment is greatly appreciated.

      Enjoy your weekend.


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