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A Silent War Within..

Updated on June 19, 2013

The chaos all around,

And the silence within..

In the moment I'm bound,

The turbulence within...

Paving a stairway..

To the push awaited long,

There is so much to say,

But I got to hold on..

Set me in the trance ,

Till the moment is gone..

Frame it in my soul,

Till I see the dawn..

The chaos all around ,

And the silence within...

Hear that sound,

Till I dive in...

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ...You have such lovely 'payoff' lines.

      Payoff lines to my way of thinking are usually - the title or the last line.

      Like I was saying - earlier this morning you have the heart and soul of a songwriter - and of course a deep poetic pure soul.

      Whatever beauty lays on the outside of you is very obvious but it's the true beauty within that makes you whole.

      Peace be with you , always and please check your fan mail.

      Afternoon tea time with Morrocan mint green tea and sending you a high five from lake erie time ontario canada 3:30pm

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      Swati Chandiramani 4 years ago from India

      High Five!!!!! Thanks for boosting my confidence once again!!! Love the way you sign off !!! Moroccan mint Tea sounds just as refreshing as your comments and hubs!!! Happy Hubbing!!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Wowful,fascinating and intriguing.I voted up.I am Moroccan.I hope I am tasting like mint tea here lol

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      Swati Chandiramani 4 years ago from India

      Lol !!!! Yes James a.k.a Morrocan mint tea !!!

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      Cynthia B Turner 4 years ago from Georgia

      Welcome to Hubpages.

      What a wonderful flow to your words! There seems to be this balance of tension in your words. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Sharing.

      Take care.

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      Swati Chandiramani 4 years ago from India

      Thanks a lot Cynthia, for such a warm welcome !!!! I'm getting addicted to this place and your comment is an icing on the cake!! Happy Hubbing!

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