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A Simple Whisper: I Love You

Updated on September 22, 2013

Do I need
a special time,
candlelight and mug of black coffee
to express
what’s on my mind?
I’m not that good
to write heartfelt
emotions in rhythm
or rhyme
No Qays nor Qabbani I am
and no fancy words
can match the hue
in your eyes,
the warmth in your voice
and even the distance between
the back of your feet and the ground
when you are in low heels
so I’ll be wise and
take my cue
and simply whisper
“I Love You”

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    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Suhail and my dog,

      Thanks so much for the visit and comment.I really appreciate that.

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Suhail and my dog,

      Thanks so much for the visit and comment.I really appreciate that.

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      Suhail Zubaid aka Clark Kent 

      5 years ago from Mississauga, ON

      Extreme sentiments put in simplest of words. I loved it.

      Btw, thank you Uzma for sharing this beautiful poem.

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      uzma shaheen,

      I am really so glad you liked it .Thanks so much!

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      Uzma Shaheen Bhatti 

      5 years ago from Lahore,Pakistan

      such a beautiful and romantic poem loved it.

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      FlourishAnyway 22,

      Thanks so much for the visit and comment.I appreciate that.

      Have a nice day!

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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      Dearest Tijani!! Oh joy, rapture...and a big Congrats!!! I am on a quick break and saw this glorious news! My heart is overjoyed that your heart is healed as I have prayed, and your heart is ready to allow love in. Thank you for sharing in your joy. Much smiles this day and I already know I will enjoy reading all of the love poetry to come! Hugs and continued love to reign in your heart, Faith Reaper.

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      life without love is but a waste,cheerless pathway where no healthy fruit allures the taste as Tappan says.Those three amazing words are the real treasure that a person has to keep and cherish .

      Hugs and blessings to you!

      Tijani

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Michael,

      Since I am in love, man haha I will write more about LOVE and MY NEW WOMAN!! LOL

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Wayne,

      Thanks so much for the comment.

      Have a nice day there!

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Martin,

      Thanks so much for the comment.

      Have a nice day there!

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      Ahlam (dreams) is the name of my gf :) Say congrats to me haha

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 

      5 years ago from Reno NV

      Very well done, a beautiful poem full of expressions of love. Jamie

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      FlourishAnyway 

      5 years ago from USA

      This is really beautiful. My preference is for poems like this to not rhyme. Amazing and heartfelt.

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      Martin Kloess 

      5 years ago from San Francisco

      So elegant.thank you

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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      So, Ahlam, the Arab female singer from the UAE, I presume?

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      Wayne Barrett 

      5 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Beautiful, James.

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      cleaner3 

      5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      very nice poem James .. you do write great poetry .. Surprise..?? No ...

      wonder why you do not write it all the time ?

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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      Simply beautiful ... and those are the three words that matter and need nothing more for they stand on their own, and reach into the depths of one's heart and soul when professed from another one's heart---very profound. Nice imagery.

      Up and more and sharing.

      Have a lovely Sunday there with you and yours dearest Tijani.

      Hugs and love, Faith Reaper

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