A Space Between

I really love this one, Audrey. It truly delves deep into the relational issues in so few words.

Superb!

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Wow. This is deep, truthful, and many more adjectives. It says quite a bit.

Audrey this was excellent.. period

Audrey this was excellent.. period

You are going to need a vacation for poetry month. I do not see anyone else trying to ring emotion from their souls on a daily basis. That is much to challenging.

Expressed real and very insightful poetry.

This is absolutely beautiful, voted up, shared, and more.

Wow! Expressed this space between so beautifully, Audrey!

Indeed our egos and self pride can create that distance....

Audrey, I am always filled with inspired awe when reading your poetry. Simply stunning and exquisite! I am such a fan.

This is relationship gold, Audrey.

Those spaces in between can be very wide sometimes! Lovely piece.

Ann

Very profound and introspective Audrey.

Who are we when no-ones looking, assailed by smooth and jagged thoughts alike and could the history of the protagonist in the verse prove to be the blind-spot of his or her future?

Warm Regards;

R.Q.

Sometimes it takes very little to begin that separation, then it cascades ever wider. Well said.

Audrey,

You ability to put thoughts I know I have into such powerful lines of poetry continue to awe an amaze me. Voted up and shared.

Blessings,

Kim

Love your poetry, Audrey, and the way you choose to illustrate them!

Definitely thought provoking. Sometimes too much analysis can destroy a relationship. Very well crafted.