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A Space Shanty (a Galactic Adventure)

Updated on February 5, 2016
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John has been writing poetry since his school days. He was awarded "Poet of the Year 2014" Hubby Awards and has had two poems become songs.

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A Space Shanty

by John Hansen (c) 2014

I race across the Universe

Ten times the speed of light.

To work the mines of Mercury

But return to Earth each night.


The mines produce plutonium

Which powers most planets' light,

A radioactive mineral

But safe if treated right.


On Earth my form of transport

Is a helium balloon,

But my spacecraft's what I like the best

With it's supersonic boom.


I was at a bar on Jupiter

Drinking space ale with a mate,

But two four-armed Saturnians

Decided on our fate.


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They called my friend a Martian

But he comes from Mercury

The ensuring fight was brutal

And quite a sight to see.


Three nights in jail on Jupiter

Is not my choice of fun

In a cell with 15 aliens

And nowhere can you run.

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I met a girl from Venus

At a nightclub on Neptune.

I took her to a motel

On Uranus' smallest moon.


She was a willing lover,

As Venusians always are,

And wanted me to fly her past

The Sun, our closest star.


I told her it was much too hot

Even Mercury's a test,

Besides I never had the fuel.

We'd make the Earth at best.


They say Pluto's not a planet now

But my parents think it's nice.

They live there in an igloo

'Cause the landscape's mostly ice.


I couldn't wait to get away,

I prefer a warmer place.

I split my time 'tween Earth and Mars

Or rocketing through space.


I love the rings of Saturn

I vacation there in March,

But mostly I enjoy my time

In my man-cave here on Mars.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      Being a Science Fiction nut myself, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Everything a Sci Fi nerd needs. Jamie

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thanks Jamie, I appreciate a comment from another sci-fi fan. It appears there aren't too many of us out there :)

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      Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Wow…this is so creative, exciting, and imaginative. Move over Star Trek! I loved this…everything from the traveling ten times the speed of light, to the motel on Uranus’ smallest moon and the man cave on Mars. Such great fun and adventure among the planets and stars in ways that also inform. Have you thought about writing a series of these? I think they would be very cool. Voted up and shared.

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Love this side of your writing John--I am a sci-fi nerd!

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thanks for the great comment Genna. This is the type of writing that I really enjoy, glad you do too. Maybe a series is a good idea.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thanks Audrey, glad there are a few of us out there.

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      whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States

      Hey...great lyrics and a wild imagination, to boot. Sounds like a gifted poet to me. whonu

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 2 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      I love it, Jodah. I feel as if I went on a tour of the Universe with you. How delightful and fun! Up and H+

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      Nithya Venkat 2 years ago from Dubai

      Cool poem, enjoyed reading!

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Hey whonu thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed this poetic adventure.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Glad you enjoyed the trip through space with me Phyllis. Thanks for reading.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you for reading this Vellur, glad you enjoyed the ride.

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      Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      I would give the series some thought, John. It is so imaginative, and different but different in a great way…as Phyllis said, a fun and delightful tour of the universe. I’m a fan.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thanks again Genna.

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      Dianna Mendez 2 years ago

      This was fascinating and a joy to read. I love space travel, even if it's only in the imagination.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you Dianna. It's always fascinated me too. Glad you enjoyed this poem.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 2 years ago from The Caribbean

      I laughed my way through this one. Totally enjoyable and super-creative.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you MsDora, glad I was able to entertain you with this space adventure.

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      Eric Wayne Flynn 2 years ago from Providence, Rhode Island

      Fun filled adventure for space cowboys and cowgirls.

      EWF

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you Eric. Yes I had fun writing this space adventure.

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      FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

      Very creative and entertaining. I don't know how I missed this one.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you Flourish.from the comments it seems a lot of people may not have received notification.

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      Kristian Režić 2 years ago from Split

      Three nights in jail on Jupiter

      Is not my choice of fun

      In a cell with 15 aliens

      And nowhere can you run.

      Very creative, funny and beautiful. Where did you find a such a great idea for a poem? Voted up :))

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi Kristian, thanks for visiting my hub. I appreciate the kind comment and vote up. I got the idea from a few songs I like..including the video "Beach House on the Moon"on this hub by Jimmy Buffet..I enjoy this sort of space fantasy and it was just a matter of thinking up ideas for adventures on each of the planets. Thanks for the vote up and follow too.

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      PaigSr 2 years ago from State of Confussion

      One thing about me its sometimes the pictures that are more important then the words. In this case the pictures jumped out and pulled me in. In fact to the point of following you and your hub pages.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Hey PaigSr, thanks. I agree. I feel attractive images are what can draw people in and differentiate one hub from another. If there are two of similar writing and information quality but one has humdrum or no pictures and the other is full of stunning images I know which one I prefer. I try to always match the images with my text and find the most atractive pics I can. Thanks for the follow.

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Hahaha ... I love this one so much! Such a creative and fun poem. I loved watching Star Trek growing up. This would make a great novel and then television series, but first a movie ... how fun would that be ... too much!

      Up +++ tweeting and pinning

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Sounds like great fun to me Faith....imagine a movie, t v series an novel. Do you know any producers by any chance? Thanks for the vote up, tweet and pin.

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      Romeos Quill 2 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      A good, light-hearted one for the sci-fi buffs Jodah - was watching ' Insurrection ' the other night and this rhyme of yours felt like a pot-pourri of Star Wars and Star Trek; some of the images were pretty cool as well.

      R.Q.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi RQ, yes I am quite a sci-fi buff so I guess I borrowed a bit from everywhere for this spoof. Glad you liked the images too.

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      Richard J ONeill 2 years ago from Bangkok, Thailand

      Well, well, well,

      I'm pleased I came along for the ride. When you started that verse off with , "I met a girl from Venus," my mind was firing all kinds of limerick lines to follow, some of them much less classy than the well thought out words you used here! Then again, I am English, so that's understandable -- I think!

      What a fantastic limerick though. You caught the verse and the rhyme perfectly and I really enjoyed the smooth ride to the end.

      Awesome and about to voted up!

      Good day to you Sir.

      Richard

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you for the visit Richard. I am glad I surprised you and deviated a little from the usual ribald limerick lines. I have written quite a few limericks and some not so classy either.. :) I had fun writing this little ditty and glad you enjoyed the ride as well. I appreciate the vote up too. Have a great day.

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      R Beggs 2 years ago from Lincoln, Nebraska

      fun, fun, and more fun…thanks for this…I enjoyed the fun writing and the fun visuals…great work…voted thumbs up and shared on TSU …others are sharing… give us more of this…thanks!

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thanks firstday, glad you enjoyed this poem. I really enjoyed writing this and it is one of my favourite hubs. I appreciate you sharing it on tsu. I am a member there also.

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      TSAD 2 years ago from maybe (the guy or girl) next door

      Now that is my kind a hub page! Lots of cool pictures. Very entertaining Jodah! I'm always interested in what inspired a writing and can see how the song at the end inspired your poetic creativity. The poetry just flows and I think should be put to music, it already, with the pics, is like a music video. Too bad I lost Frik and Frak, they could have helped you make a Space Shanty video bein from Mars.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you Tsadjatko. I seem to have some sort of affinity to astronomical subjects. They seem to lend themselves well to rollicking songs/poetry. bring back Frik and Frak. Glad you enjoyed this hub.

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      Anemix 20 months ago

      my kind of hub! loved the pictures and how the poem flows! I love the universe too! :)

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      John Hansen 20 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hey anemixflarie, thanks for checking this hub out. It's one of my personal favourites of the poems I have written, along with the sequel "A Traveller's Guide to the Galaxy". I appreciate your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed it.

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