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36 "A Special Poem"

Updated on April 12, 2012
Roses whisper love.
Roses whisper love.

Listen to whispers

 

Listen To a Whispering Rose

 

There’s a story about whispering roses.

They don’t have eyes, mouths or noses.

But they know love from the start,

They know true love comes from the heart.

They are given at a special time,

And can make a lady’s heart chime.

If her heart listens really close,

They will say what she already knows.

They whisper, “He will love you forever,

And our love will always endeavor.”

Whispering roses are really smart,

They feel what’s in someone’s heart.

So, if you hear a whispering rose,

Listen real close to its prose.

Greg

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      Danka 2 years ago

      11 Mar ’12 2:54 am by Jordan I like the new design of BlenderNerd. Hopefully there'll be more donwolads at some point.Greg,I'd like to do a 3D model of you if you'd be willing to let me do it. Drop me a line.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi again 34th BG, thank you. That's one of the many reasons I love her, she has a heart as big as the world and everybody else comes before her. And thank you for the quote. It doesn't matter what play, the thought from you is what counts. Greg

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      34th Bomb Group 5 years ago from Western New York State

      "Foolish is the child who forgets her parents piteous deaths."

      Shakespeare ~ I can't find the play. Heavy & true as all get 0ut.

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      34th Bomb Group 5 years ago from Western New York State

      Ah - I understand. "Been there, done that" as they say.

      She wouldn't be worth your time if she wasn't doing what she's doing.

      God bless you ALL... 34th

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi 34th BG, Thank you. The one thing that is keeping us apart is her mother's illness. Until that changes we will love each other from afar. We have made it through tougher ordeals than this, we will make it through this too, I know that in my heart. And yes, I do consider myself very lucky to still have her in my life. Thank you for the concern. Greg

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      34th Bomb Group 5 years ago from Western New York State

      There's got to be a way the two 0f you can be together asap.

      God Bless you both ~ how lucky you are!!

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Cloud, Thank you. Hey, some of us men do have a senestive side. My girlfriend is the inspirstion for everything I do. Sometimes a little word from her sets the old wheels to turning. Greg

      Hi 34th BG, Thank you so very much. Greg

      Hi Forde, Thank you and for the vote. Greg

      Hi to B....., Thank you. As I told Cloud, some of us men do have a sensetive side. Thank you for the vote too. Greg

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Simply beautiful, I just got my friend to read this she, said ah..... And it's by a man. Voting up all the way.

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      FordeAhern 5 years ago from Broadford, Co. Limerick. ireland

      Beautiful poem, voted up. Thank you for sharing

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      34th Bomb Group 5 years ago from Western New York State

      WONDERFUL!!

      Thank you!!

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Wow, such a beautifully written hub, and by a man. That is rare of us men to have the potential to write a poem with such beauty.

      I commend you on a job well done with this hub, and I will be reading more from you for sure, thanks for creating this awesome poem about the love vented from a single whispering rose.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Slingo, Thank you for the visit and commment. Sometimes the whisper can be heard above all else. Greg

      Hi princess, Thank you for the visit and comment. You keep loving those roses. Someday they will love you back. Greg

      Hi Dmop, Thank you for the visit and comment. Yes, we could all take a lesson from the tender rose with the protectong thorns. Greg

      Hi Sunnie, Thank you for the visit and comment. I love roses too. Greg

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      Sunnie Day 5 years ago

      Beautiful..I love Roses!

      Sunnie

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      dmop 5 years ago from Cambridge City, IN

      Great poem Greg, a whispering rose is quite smart, we could all take a lesson from them.

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      Princess Prisca 5 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      Hey Greg,

      Beautiful work! Just so happens that roses are my favorite flowers, you have captured the 'true essence' of this incredibly beautiful flower.

      Ciao...Princess Prisca

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      sligobay 6 years ago from east of the equator

      Everyone will listen to the whisper of a rose and its a beautiful thought.

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      Greg Schweizer 6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Samson, Thank you for the comment and vote up. Greg

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      Sam 6 years ago from Tennessee

      voted up and beautiful! Well written and enticing...

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      Greg Schweizer 6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Darknlovely, thank you for the vote up and the comment. Greg

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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      very enjoyable to read. vote up

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      Greg Schweizer 6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Rhonda, Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed. Greg

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      Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

      A very lovely poem and I enjoyed it. Rated up awesome.

      Sweet wishes Rhonda

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      Greg Schweizer 6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Lela, Thank you. I have only in the last few years been able to put my feelings into words and even moreso, on "paper", so-to-speak. Greg

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      CreatePerfection 6 years ago from Beautiful Colorado

      Hi Greg, this is so beautiful and I can tell it is from your heart. Thank you for bringing softness and kindness into the world with your lovely poetry.

      Up/Beautiful

      Lela

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      Greg Schweizer 6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Polly, Thank you. Something hits me every once in a while, and I don't mean my girlfriend. Greg

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      Pollyannalana 6 years ago from US

      A rose by any other name would still smell as sweet. You draw a very lovely picture in the mind.

      Polly