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A Thunderstorm of the Heart

Updated on September 5, 2011

A thunderstorm of the heart

“Lay on my chest my love…can you hear that?”

“Hear what, sweet one?”



“Oh yes my love, a dazzling wind swirling around my heart.”

“Mmm, I’m not sure I hear it darling.”

“Really, it’s the sound my heart makes when it picks up speed by the sight of you. Can’t you hear it?”

“Ahh I think I do my sweet.”

“What about the thunder?”


“Yes, a glorious thunder rumbling deeply within my chest.”

“Tell me sweet, what is this thunder I’m hearing?”

“It’s the sound of my heart pounding dangerously by the feel of you.”

“What a lovely sound.”

“Indeed. How about the lighting?”


“Yes, that striking sound of crackling lightning hitting my heart.”

“Maybe, will you tell me what it sounds like?”

“Of course my love, it is the sound of electricity you send to my heart by the touch of you.”

“Ahh, I definitely can hear it now.”

“Good. Now what about the rain?”


“Oh yes, that magically soothing sound of rain falling heavily.”

“Tell me my dear, what is this rain I hear?”

“It’s the sound of my blood flowing swiftly through my veins to my heart by the love radiating from you.”

“What a magnificent sound, my sweet.”

“Do you know what you’re hearing my love?”

“Haven’t the slightest idea.”

“You’re hearing a thunderstorm of the heart. The most brilliant storm one can ever experience but no one ever sees. Every day that I am with you, my love, do I experience such a storm. Only you can make my heart blow wind. Only you can make my heart create thunder. Only you can make my heart strike lightning. Only you can make my heart pour rain. And only you can hear the thunderstorm brewing inside my heart because without you it won’t be there.”

“Oh my darling sweet, what a wonderful way of saying you love me and I guess now I will have to spend my life making sure this storm is continuous.”

“And how, may I ask, are you planning to do that?”

“Well, my sweet there is only one way to make sure of this.”

“And that would be?”

“To make sure you can always see me. To make sure you always feel me. To make sure I’m always touching you. And to make sure you can always feel my love.”

“How in the world can you do that we can’t always be by each other?”

“It’s very simple my sweet. I will just never let you go and I will hold you in my arms for the rest of my life lavishing in the sound of your thunderstorm.”

“And what will I do my love?”

“You will lavish yourself in the sound of mine.”


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    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      9 years ago

      Thank you for reading and your lovely comment!

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      Marisa Hammond Olivares 

      9 years ago from Texas

      how romantic! Full of wonderful imagery - made me think of a conversation between sweet innocent lovers.

      Thank you for sharing.

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      9 years ago

      Thank you!!! You don't know how happy it makes me to know that you enjoy my writing!! Thanks for you wonderful comment and the vote Suzettenaples you have put a smile on my face!

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      Suzette Walker 

      9 years ago from Taos, NM

      What a lovely, lovely, poem! This just knocked me over! I really enjoyed reading this. You are such a beautiful writer. I always enjoy your hubs. Keep writing! Voted up!

      And the photographs are outstanding and really add to the poem.

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      9 years ago

      Thank you!! I'm soo happy that you loved it!! Stay sweet Ubani and thank you again!

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 

      9 years ago from Lagos

      Great poem. I can feel the thunderstorm all over me and it feels so good. Dear, i love this poem. You ve done well

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      9 years ago

      Thank you so much Hunbbel!!

      Oh what a wonderful sound it is!!!

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 

      9 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      This is beautiful indeed. One can really imagine the situation you were trying to portray. You have done a wonderful job here. Thumbs up!

      And oh! Can you hear the thunderstorm in my heart after reading this? ;)

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      10 years ago

      Thank you I'm happy you liked it and that it reminds you of a wonderful time in your life. Thanks for reading and sharing!!

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      10 years ago from Bluffton, SC

      If i had to detail a beautiful intimate moment, this would be it. Your words are so wonderfully true. when I read this I seen myself back in college with a girl I cared about, even though it wasn't as deep and lovely as this work, but I remember my heart beating quickly, and it definitely felt like a thunderstorm of my heart.

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      10 years ago

      I'm really happy that you liked it!! Thank you so much for your wonderful comment!

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      10 years ago from Noblesville, IN

      WOW, I mean WOW! I loved it, dramatic, romantic, sweet, awesome!

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      10 years ago

      Thank you Gus!! I'm soooo happy you loved it!! Can't wait to read what up next for you!!

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      10 years ago from inside my own mind where nothing is bound or constrained by definitions or societal norms :) try it

      Amazing Tatee, I really love it. It gives one a deeper appreciation of the "term" love you went above and beyond describing the feelings associated with it. Your work depicts beautiful imagery w/o the pictures. Great Piece sissy, I have some catching up to do lol :)

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      10 years ago

      Thank you so much you have sweentend my day with your comment! Thank you!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 

      10 years ago from Nepal

      You have that ability to give a new twist to the existing imagery. Your wordplay is awesome.

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      10 years ago from Talisay City, Cebu

      well, it seems that we're on the same boat...glad to meet a kindred spirit...

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      10 years ago

      I'm glad my hub could change the way you see things...thanks for reading!

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      10 years ago from Philippines

      Your definition of the "power of love" have change my perception of thunderstorms.:)

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      10 years ago

      Thank you!

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      10 years ago

      amazing love poem. upup

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      10 years ago

      Me too, some of which makes me cry because I'm a big softy but I love them just the same!

    • raciniwa profile image


      10 years ago from Talisay City, Cebu

      you're welcome...i do love poetry especially if it comes from the heart...

    • Sweets21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Tara Sellers 

      10 years ago

      Well thank you...I appreciate you reading it!!

    • raciniwa profile image


      10 years ago from Talisay City, Cebu full of love...i appreciate the choice of words...


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