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A Tipping Point

Updated on April 16, 2013
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Audrey is a poet, classical singer and voice teacher, recovering attorney and licensed psychotherapist.

Daniels, Gene, photographer, Photographer (NARA record: 8463941); Environmental Protection Agency; May 1972
Daniels, Gene, photographer, Photographer (NARA record: 8463941); Environmental Protection Agency; May 1972 | Source

Pollution’s haze

Imbues dusk’s light

With a softness not found in nature’s palette.


It blurs the edges of light

And brushes out its harshness

Passing on orange to an already pink sky.


Kissed in that way--


I breathe it in and wonder

Where the tipping point lies

Between beauty and destruction.



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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you Tom!

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you Rasma! I feel the ocean near me--it helps!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Blossom

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you DDE!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      I have been remiss an answering comments!! Thank you shiningirisheyes!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Thank you Frank! I so appreciate your kind comments

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Thank you for reading this one drbj!

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A lovely poem and so well approached with great wisdom.

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Thank you Lupita!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Thank you khmazz!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Thank you Suzette!!!

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      suzettenaples 4 years ago

      This is beautiful Audrey! Your images and photo ate perfect. Love the "blurred edges" and love the question of the tipping point!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Hi Linda! Thanks!

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      Linda Bilyeu 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

      I'm a fan of Florida sunsets and your poems :)

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Hello Vinaya! Thank you!!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Hi Faith Reaper!! Thank you so much!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Audrey,

      This poem leaves me wondering about something important in life.

      Beautiful poem.

      Have a great weekend.

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      Kristen Mazzola 5 years ago from South Florida

      I love your writing style, it is so beautiful :) Great piece!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Nuggets of wisdom. I'm glad I'm living out in the suburbs where I can breathe and walk in the woods.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      I hate the city smog, but it's where most of us live. At least we can still see the lovely colours of the sunsets.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Thank you Ruby!! I often thing of moving to the country--but music is my business and that is usually bigger city stuff

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      Ruby Jean Richert 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Audrey. I am thankful that i live in a small town away from the polluted factories and smog, but i must admit, i would love the city lights and theaters.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Thank you Pamela! The truth is often sad--and yet, we must find a way to honor it

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      Pamela Oglesby 5 years ago from United States

      Very touching poem - sad and beautiful at the same time. I also wonder where the tipping point lies. The truth is often sad.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Nellieanna--I didn't originally write it that way--but yes--timely--so very sad--

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      Nellieanna Hay 5 years ago from TEXAS

      It's amazingly timely, Audrey. Somehow the colors of the sunset bespeak the bomb's blaze and your "tipping point" seems to suggest the moment when the joy of that event turned to something completely opposite. It gives me goose bumps AND chills up and down my spine.

      Thank you for another very lovely, effective expression of your artistry, which you sum up & conclude with:

      "I breathe it in and wonder

      Where the tipping point lies

      Between beauty and destruction."

      It seems to emerge from some other concept of reality, doesn't it?

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi my friend, powerful words making a bold but true statement . Well done !

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Ahhh - More wonderful poetry. And that line between beauty and destruction is so very fine, isn't it?

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      deep Audrey.. and my respect for your poetry is boundless...:)

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      drbj and sherry 5 years ago from south Florida

      Powerful poetic images, Audrey, but I much prefer the Florida sunsets which are pure and clear and not obscured by smog.

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      LupitaRonquillo 5 years ago

      Powerful poem. I was born and raised in L.A. and each time I fly out from there, it looks as though we are departing a plume of brown smoke from an industrial stack! Sometimes we can only see nature's beauty through a dusty screen...

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Profound write here of a sad reality!

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Thank you for reading this one wetnose--I lived in LA for a long time--and loved the sunsets there

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      wetnosedogs 5 years ago from Alabama

      Quite a gem of words there.

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