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A Trusting Poem

Updated on May 14, 2019
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My name is William and I have been writing poetry and lyrics for so many years. I'd like to be published and accomplished writer.

A Trusting Poem

Looking back on yesterday, again

Drowning in a pool of sorrows

Trying to bring back memories

For now something just to borrow

It won't bring back "yesterday"

No matter how hard we try and feel

Can only look forward for tomorrow

Knowing deep down you are real

Love never fades away

True love anyways

I feel you flowing through

Inside my veins

A heart so real for you

Another day passes me by

Being able to dream of you

At this moment, oh so glad

I can close my eyes

Cause at this very moment

And forever, with you

Is where my heart lies.

© 2009 Dom Shadows

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    • lilyfly profile image

      Lillian K. Staats 

      7 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska

      What is it with Ohio, well done..... keep working lovey... lily

    • DomShadows profile imageAUTHOR

      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      very right thank you somuch..

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      Bohemian rhapsody 

      9 years ago from New york

      I feel the emotionality in this piece quite strongly and see clearly the feelings you have for this person. That's what makes poems either strong or weak. And this is definitely a strong piece. Good going.

    • DomShadows profile imageAUTHOR

      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      write--- thanks but how do I do that?

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      writebypen 

      9 years ago

      This should be on the front page mate

      very cool

    • DomShadows profile imageAUTHOR

      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      Kim--> TY so much for your kind words. They mean so much, I'm not use to all this attention and I've always been shy not knowing "my talent"

      People here have opened my eyes.. Ty... And for being beautiful too..

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      kimberlyslyrics 

      9 years ago

      "Another Day blesses me" love that

      you do express yourself well, and a talented man.

      Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

      xo

      Kimbrtly

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      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      D-- Thanks for the compliment and I will start to focus on imagery.. Ty..

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      Denizee 

      9 years ago

      It's simplistic style is noteworthy - and another sad submission of love lost. You have the passion inside of you to write, I would focus on imagery now to build your poems up and make them stand out - very good job, thank you for sharing.

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      tantrum 

      9 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      I like this one! full of feeling. ! thanks ! :)

    • DomShadows profile imageAUTHOR

      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      Carol, thats a pretty good summary. I don't know all the terminology or even the best grammar but I have common sense and can be a natural. I have a lot of copyrighted material but im scared; more so untrustworthy I think of some. I wanna work for hallmark but you heard about them.. lol right

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      Carolyn Blacknall 

      9 years ago from Houston, Texas

      Very romantic. Especially if you wrote it before you met her. Then you are writing about the ideal of love. Keep up the good work.- Carol

    • DomShadows profile imageAUTHOR

      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      Actually I wrote this before I met her. iTs not really wrote in context, or rather in place of my self or really anyone i know. Sometimes I try and put myself in other people shoes and try to see and view and conquer new corners, or task. Different styles.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      9 years ago from Great Britain

      You are never going to stop loving this woman are you??That was beautiful again. I wish you happiness.

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