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A Wish Without Bloom

Updated on January 9, 2013

Title: A Wish Without Bloom

I'm laying here exhausted
My breaths are next to nothing
It seems I can't take anymore
And hope rinses out from my eyes
Streams of emptiness so fragile
Yet so broken too
All at the expense of simply loving you

Just wanted something forever shared
Cause the loneliness was killing me
And you became my everything; and that was too much

Pain became true harmony
The only thing thats left of me
I'm feeling my own shadow transpire
And I'm convinced I'm not good enough
My eyes portray the shattered dreams of a child
Because all thats left were memories
A mass of thoughts tie to my soul
Where I have lost all control

I hope I'm at least a memory
Cause I really tried to be your dream

I'm counting back the times I held on
Cause I wantt to know I mattered
A dream gets crushed; it doesn't die
It evolves a scar seen in your eyes
For every breath I didn't count
It's cause I lost count of loving you
I'll spend forever holding on
Holding to a wish that chose not to bloom

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    • SMonaghan119 profile imageAUTHOR

      Sean 

      5 years ago from PA

      hey epi could you give me your thoughts on broken man without a name...thats the poem I'm trying to get most attention to...hah...

    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 

      5 years ago

      I love using my time here and my legacy too in order to 'let loose' creatively speaking - lol - but also to promote other writers/artists/poet - hopefully that will be my hub epitaph.

      Please check out SIBERIAN WOLF and I will send him your way too.

      lake erie time canada 4:20am

    • SMonaghan119 profile imageAUTHOR

      Sean 

      5 years ago from PA

      Thank y0u very much sir I appreciate all your kind words and feel it to be a privilege to be recognized by someone of your stature. Look forward to looking more into your work as the days come and go.

    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 

      5 years ago

      Yet another great title, and words to die for - and very inspiring to the Epi-man. You write with a natural skill and your poetic thoughts always flow effortlessly . I am unschooled myself although I have a college education but unschooled as a writer which is sometimes to one's advantage because you can be more free and naturalistic without the confines of traditions and guidelines. I always just say - go for it - be yourself and don't necessarily follow any styles you may see in old stuff poetry anthologies - lol lol

      lake erie time 1:30pm well the pleasure has been all mine today Sean - I will drop by tomorrow again - have a nice, happy and safe day and night - great hanging out with you .....

      Also feel free to check out some of my 'followers' and 'friends' in my comment section too ....

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