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Poem about Writer's Block - Haiku for Writers

Updated on June 13, 2013
Crumpled papers
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Writer's Frustration


Steaming, pressure up,

Crumpled papers, burst out curse--

Fuming! Sighs . . . . I'm done.


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    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Leftyfusion--I love your comment. Very nice! Great effort! Syllables of 5, next line 7, next line 5. Go for it!

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      Christopher Lingsch 

      6 years ago from Alexandria, NH

      Very funny, made me laugh

      Words sewn together

      I cringe,its been a long time since i tired to write a haiku.

      Dammit! I forgot the rules!

      Too many lines??

      (major fail on my part...I'm better at poems)

      : ) great job!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      LOL, carter! Cheers right back at ya!

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      Mary 

      6 years ago from Cronulla NSW

      Yep!! I hear ya...feel for ya...have to lol again after shouting:) cheers

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Claudia--Glad you like the haiku! thanks for sharing it with your friends!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Susan, I'm so glad you can relate--and glad you came by! Thanks!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Hyphenbird--Yes, so true! We say we're done but never can really be!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Thanks, always exploring. Cheers to you, too!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Thanks, vespawoolf! It was VERY tense. LOL. Thanks for the vote up!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Thanks, Ruchira! I'm sure you can! Thanks so much!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Laurinzo--Wow, what a compliment! Thanks so much!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      europewalker--I think any writer can probably relate, huh? Thanks for the comment!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      teaches, I know you do! Thanks!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Mhatter--I'm glad you were inspired! I'll have to check it out!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Thanks, jonmcclusk. You're right; I just had to take a break to express my frustration! Thanks!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      timthechripinbyrd--haha! Glad you liked my comment to billybuc. I couldn't resist!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Aw, molometer. Thank you so much!!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Joyce, thanks! Yes, it does sound like you know how it feels!!!!!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Thanks, TT! Boy, did I feel it when i wrote that!!!!!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      unknown spy--So glad you like it!!! I also like that you're from Neverland. I never want to grow up either. :-)

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      GiblinGirl--Glad you can understand! :-) Writers definitely can!

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      Claudia Tello 

      6 years ago from Mexico

      Funny and very witty, my favorite Haiku until now. I am sharing this one with my facebook friends.

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      Susan Zutautas 

      6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      I too can so well relate to your haiku :) Excellent!

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      Brenda Barnes 

      6 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      Been there-felt that! It is funny how we scream "I am done!" and continue on without pause. Thanks Victoria. I enjoyed your poem.

    • always exploring profile image

      Ruby Jean Richert 

      6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I can relate...Cheers

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      vespawoolf 

      6 years ago from Peru, South America

      I could feel the tension...great choice of words! Voted up!

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      Ruchira 

      6 years ago from United States

      haha...so relate to this scenario, Vicki.

      many votes!!

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      Live To Write 

      6 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      Incredible tribute to the art of writing, and the haiku style of poetry...Wow!

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      europewalker 

      6 years ago

      Awesome haiku and how true. Very relatable, glad to know others are going through the same thing:)

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      Dianna Mendez 

      6 years ago

      I can feel the frustration and know the anguish!

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      I was writing you

      and guess what fell in my lap

      Another idea

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      Jonathan McCloskey 

      6 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

      Excellent poem, instant writer's block cure.

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      timthechirpinbyrd 

      6 years ago from Newport News, VA

      I couldn't have said it better myself. I like what you said to billybuc, "paper is cheaper than a crumpled up laptop. hahaha!" Classic.

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      molometer 

      6 years ago from United Kingdom

      You said it Victoria. It can be very frustrating writing a haiku poem. You got it just right this time though.

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      Joyce Haragsim 

      6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      I know how you feel when words don't come, curse curse scream.

      Voted up awesome and interesting, Joyce.

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Still working on it, CC, but it's getting better. It's a learning experience, right?

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      Terrye Toombs 

      6 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      You hit the nail on the head, V! Great job. :)

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      I guess you're right, arb. Very well said. :-)

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Jools! I was the exploding volcano, so I'm glad the haiku came across that way. Thanks for the input!

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      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Steadman--LIke I told billybuc, paper is cheaper than a crumpled up laptop. hahaha!

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      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Bill, at least it's cheaper than throwing my laptop across the room. LOL!

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      Not Found 

      6 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hahaha nice one Victoria!! I like it.

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      GiblinGirl 

      6 years ago from New Jersey

      That made me smile in understanding - anyone who writes has definitely been there.

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      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Thanks, midget38! I totally agree!

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      Cynthia Calhoun 

      6 years ago from Western NC

      Aw, I hope after walking away it got better. :) You'll get it! You'll do it!! :)

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      arb 

      6 years ago from oregon

      She has a sense of humor! This was terriffic. If this all came easy, where would the treasure be?

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      Jools Hogg 

      6 years ago from North-East UK

      Victoria, brilliant haiku! Amazing, 17 syllables and it still read like a volcano exploding!

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      Steadman11 

      6 years ago

      I am sure we've all felt this way! It's Perfect! And I agree with billybuc, this is why I don't use paper anymore!

    • Victoria Lynn profile imageAUTHOR

      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Thanks, Josh! I SURE can relate tonight!!!!!

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      Bill Holland 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      That's why I don't write on paper any longer; way too expensive! Fun read Vicki!

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      Michelle Liew 

      6 years ago from Singapore

      That's one haiku writers know too well! Great, Vicki, voted up.

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      Joshua Zerbini 

      6 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Victoria,

      Just brilliant! We can all relate to this! Excellent job Vicki!

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