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A last look – forever and ever (a poem)

Updated on November 6, 2013

Drinking life from your eyes

And I love to die thousand deaths

Marooned are the desire flies

For the nocturnal dive in hearths

And the ashes cry for illuminaty intense

The sparks of death shines in halo

To brighten the ambience of pretence

And I do pretend to be alive…

The steps of life fading in distance

Waves of relief layering the footprints

Hanging yarns of bounded moments in vain

No destination of life prevails …

Death rules out intoxicating illusions..

Rustles of dried foliages dies with longings..

Furthering the lineages of silhouetted iris….

Couple of hot tears ….

Shed in remembrance of me by me….

Words are expressed in the obituary

It’s me only and my world…

Horizon is stuffed cacophony of eternal void

Swinging lethargy of fireworks dazzle…

Pieces of life pregnant with connoisseur of death

Then a funeral so avid ….

Mourned by me….

In those, dusky beauties of lonesome eyes…

Husky voice bid good bye…

If only it would have been a dream

Lived for to die for many thousand times…

I wish…to walk a dream to be in your arms…

To breathe my last….

And to live forever…looking in those dark pool of death!!!!


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    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Deb,

      Many thanks for you dropped by here . Glad that you liked it.



      Anna Haven....Many thanks and happy that you have liked it.


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      Anna Haven 

      5 years ago from Scotland

      Interesting poetry which sounds intriguingly metaphorical. Your images compliment it very well.

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      Deb Hirt 

      5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This could easily be a life after death experience. I hope I am so lucky to see what happens around my prior life when I am gone.

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Frank Atanacio.......many thanks for your time here..its nice to have you here after a long time...hope you are doing fine. Take care



      Jackie....thank you so much for your visit...glad that you liked it. take care


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      Jackie Lynnley 

      5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Cascading fall of images, dramatic expressions looking at death. Well done!

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      Frank Atanacio 

      5 years ago from Shelton

      wow DGH.. this was actually really good.. intense.. yet a bit haunting I loved it :) Frank

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you as ever BlossomSB..take care and have a great weekend ahead:-)

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 

      5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Beautiful poem and great images.

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks dear Faith.....your visit and words are much appreciated for. take care..luv


    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you my friends out there for your all continual support and inspiration ...




      Have a wonderful day ahead and many smiles all your ways:-)

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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      What a look ... very dramatic.

      Superb poetry!

      Up and more

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      5 years ago

      Yes beautiful poetry and words for sure



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      5 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Beautiful and haunting poem! Thank you for sharing, Deergha!

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      Devika Primić 

      5 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A last look – forever and ever so cold and but with such great expression


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