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A poem, God's Creation
Someday we shall be with him in his kingdom on high
Sitting out on my patio just as the sun goes down
I look to the Heavens and see beauty abound
The clouds fluffy white and still floating around
The sky still blue with just a hint of pink hue breaking through
Soon the sun will go sound asleep
As the moon rises from just underneath
The sky comes alive with sparkling stars
Each twinkling hello from the Heavens so far
As I gaze at all the glittery wonder
My mind is dazzled at the breathtaking splendor
When the sun goes asleep here in America where I live
It rises for our neighbors, it's heat and light to freely give
And when our night is through and the moon descends
The sun will surely rise for us once again
God created the Heavens for the world to share
Just like he created us with his tender loving care
So let's all blend together with kindness and goodwill
Forever waiting for God's promise to fulfill
Someday we shall be with him in his kingdom on high
Someday we shall live eternally beyond his spectacular created sky.
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What a wonderful gift you have. Your expressions are so vivid, I feel almost like I'm sitting on that patio too.
Voted up and beautiful.
BTW, I know you know already that some folks ain't gonna make it....I'll see you there. :)
Up, awesome and beautiful. Sometimes we just look at the world around us and say "wow". This was great. You've really been knocking them out of the park lately.
Thanks for the kind words directed to my mom. I'm sure she appreciated hearing such positive things. Peace and blessings.
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Fay, I wish you were here with me when i saw this. Thank you for your kind words, and your BTW comment brings more than a smile, i'm cracking up here. I'll see you there Fay. Those that want it all, never thinking of anyone but themselves 'ain't gona ride that train!!!
Cheers My Friend
Thank you Ruby for a beautiful an awesome masterpiece. Thank you for sharing it. Godspeed.creativeone59
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Doug, Thank you so much, that's what happened, i looked and saw beauty. About the comment i made to your Mother, i had been reading P. comments to you and getting madder each time she came back, when your Mother said what she did, i just had to speak. When you like a poem i've done, i'm thrilled. You know i think you're the best. Thank's again.
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Benny Faye, Thank you.I'm happy that you liked it and i love sharing it with you.
God Bless
Your graceful offering is surely a prayer received,Ruby.;)
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Such a beautiful comment Mentalist. Thank you........
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Ruby, It is impossible not to be moved by the beauty of a sunset. You express it so well! Thank you!
I have come to expect great a great read every time I see that you have published. Am I disappointed ? No never, thank you so much for sharing your talent with us on here.
I push all buttons and rate up here Ruby.
Take care
Eiddwen.
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Sometimes i forget to look at the sky, and i miss the beauty. thank you.
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Eiddwen, You're very kind. Thank you. The sky is alive with so much beauty.
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So beautiful, so inspiring, so superior, Ruby. Just like you, m'dear. Thank you for this praiseworthy poem.
Rated up, of course.
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Oh My,
Your comment makes my day. Thank you. So happy that you liked it.
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I've got goosebumps at God's grand creation that you so vividly drew a picture of.
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Thank you so much. You're very kind.
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Beautiful work!
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Happy that you came to visit Will. Thank you.
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Another happy, beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.
What a wonderful world and a beautiful poem.
..well.... when God created someone as special as you - that's when He really took it to another level .......
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Hello A.A., Thank's for the gracious comment. Happy to share.
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acaetnna, I agree, we have a wonderful world. Thank you for the sweet comment.
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Epi, Bless you. You make my day brighter. Your comments are always so encouraging. Thank you.
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How beautiful!! Such talent is shown here! Bravo! Encore!
I love how God brings images and words to us. And how He must smile when we use the gifts to bring glory to Himself. This is very beautiful and I know He is smiling.
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Daydreamer, Hello, Your comment is very uplifting, i'm so glad you liked my poem. Thank you.
Smiles..
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Hyphenbird, How very sweet to think God is smiling. I know he made the Heavens for us to see the beauty, the only problem, i forget to look up sometimes. I guess i'll have to blame HP. Hee Thank you.
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Ruby, your poems are always so enlightening and convey messages of goodwill! Those are my favorite kind of poem! Peace and Love, Fossi
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My Dear Friend Fossi, So glad you were enlightened. Tonight, look up at the Heavens and you will see the beauty that inspired this piece. Thank you.
Love Ya.....
Great poem, always! I love looking up at the sky and the stars. Even watching the sunsets when we have them. The sky is like so many of our moods, sometimes gloomy, stormy or bright! Yes, the heavens above...the sky, is a great gift from our creator. A beauty no man could ever re-create...unless he copied it in a painting. : )
The world around us, even in its most mundane and ordinary times, is really full of wonder if we are open to it and out best response to it is gratitude. Great expression of the wonder of it. Thanks for sharing.
Love and peace
Tony
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Shygirl, You are so right..nothing is as beautiful as the Heavens at night. I'm happy you came to read.. I love your comment, and i agree completely.
Cheers My Friend......
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Tony, I'm always thrilled when you come by to read my poems.. Our philosophy about life and people are so connected in many ways. Thank you...
Love and Peace
Ruby
Beautiful and very upbeat poem lauding our Creator. Very very wonderful to read.
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Thank you Bobbi. Your comment is really appreciated... I'm happy when you come by my place....
always, that was wonderful. Thank you for sharing
Tina
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Thank you gr82bme, I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem. I loved writing it.
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beautiful and uplifting, thank you for sharing such wonderful thoughts with us all
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Thank you nighthag. It's a pleasure to share my thoughts with you.
Hi Ruby, I think I missed my mail :), I did not see this lovely poem. Yeah, I also sit under the stars and wonder when will I be with my King. Hope to see you there Ruby, the works of His hands are aways amazing!
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What a wonderful comment sofs. Thank you. I want to see you there too. What a wonderful day that will be ... When we see our loved ones who have already gone on to be with God.... and yes his creation is beautiful.
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isn't it amazing how beautiful God's creation is? I truly enjoyed this one Ruby.
beautiful work!
god created us with his hands
he created each beautiful land
he created the sky
full of stars for all our eyes
with just one touch
he fills us with love so very much!
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Lady_Tenaz, So glad you liked my poem. Thank you .
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I got a great poem from you, littlesecret113, Thank you. Glad you came by.
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Beautiful, Ruby. I am glad to know how you adore God. We should following you. This hub show your spirituality side. I am proud become your family here. Keep it up. This hub may read entire the world...amen. Rated up. God bless you!
Prasetio:)
cute Poem Ruby, but there is no heaven for us you know, Gods plan is for us to live on this earth in his paradise again.to enjoy all his creations.
God Bless
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Prasetio, Hello my friend... You are like family. Your comments are always so positive..When we think about the entire world reading something we write, makes me hope to get it right... Thank you and God Bless you too
Ruby:)
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Viet, I don't think about where Heaven is to be. The bible is not too clear on that...Some say here, while others say in Heaven.. Christ did say that he would prepare a place for us. Different religions have their own belief and that's fine with me. I just want to make sure that i am ready to meet God when i leave this place called earth. Thank you for coming by... I always appreciate your comments.
God Bless
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! What a wonderful poem, as you are wonderful!!! Voted-UP?
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drpastor, So happy to see you. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Your approval means a lot to me...
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Truly the words for God. Thanks for sharing
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V Kumar, Nice to meet you. Thank you for a lovely comment.
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Hi, what a beautiful poem, you explained it so well, I often sit outside and watch the sun go down, especially when it has been a lovely day, and the sky is all blue and pink, lovely thanks nell
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Hello Nell, Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm so happy that the weather is getting warm.. I too love to sit outside and watch all the beauty in the sky.
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God creation is beautiful and I'm sure God is pleased that you use the gift he's given you so freely and with such grace. Thanks :) Katie
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Thank you Katie..You're very kind. Your comments are always so uplifting.
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Nicely done dear Ruby. The "Pearl" in you really shines through. God bless you.
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Thank you Micky...Your comment makes me feel blessed. I just got on the computer. We had two tornados here last night, been without electricity since midnight last night. I has some damage to my house, but didn't get hurt.The town looks like a war zone, not one person got hurt...That's the main thing... Take care.
God bless you.
Ruby, This is such a beautiful poem and I felt like I wasn't sitting on that patio next to you. You have a very special gift. God Bless.
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Thank you Pamela99, I'm happy that you felt like you were with me on the patio...Your comment is uplifting and very generous.
God Bless
What a wonderful and vivid poem you wrote voted up!
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Hello spotlight19, Thank you for coming to read, your comment is really appreciated.
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Another great expression of appreciation. you must be a very happy and contented man to be able to express such feelings. Thank you.
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Thank you Spirit Whisperer. I am a woman and i am contented, oh i have my days when something may creep in, but when i can write a poem, I'm back up again. Thank you for coming by and leaving a kind comment.
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I enjoyed this lovely poem. Thank you for sharing your creative gifts with us yet again. This one is a beauty!
I was feeling a bit down tonight so I decided to visit you. It was a wise choice. I feel better already. Thanks for being you always.
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Hyphenbird, I'm glad you feel better. I hope you stay feeling better. It's so funny, i was feeling down yerterday, but today i feel better, sometimes life can be off track. I'm ready for a story or a beautiful poem from you. Thank you for being a friend. I appreciate you very much.
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Nice words. They reflect the love you have for the Lord. God bless you.
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Oh thank you V Kumar, I do love our Lord..His mercy lifts us when we remember he is always there for all who will call on his name. Thank you for your visit. I read one of your Hubs and there was no place provided for a comment, anyway, i enjoyed it very much.
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A lovely poem.
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Hello Scarface1300, Nice to meet you. Thank's for the follow and lovely comment. I will be over to see you in a minute.
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Hello Ruby : This is a wonderful prayer for all of our species sharing this sky night and day to share peace and goodwill. I also love your new profile pic because it's you. Thanks for sharing these beautiful images.
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Hello Gerry, Happy to see you. I'm humbled when you like something i've written. How i wish for words like you so effortlessly blend together...About my picture, i'ts who i am on the inside, a few years younger Hee Hee Thank you my friend.
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Wonderful poem. Very moving and well written. dw
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d.William, Thank you so much for reading and leaving a positive comment.
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You've made a believer out of me!!! Good morning (always exploring). This is a beautiful poem, it drips with soul searching thought--it is a Gem to find!
Thanks for sharing--it is very uplifting,
Hugs and warm wishes,
MM
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Hello Maggie, You're so kind. Thank you. I loved writing this. The sky has always fascinated me, as a child, i would gaze up at the stars and be filled with wonder. Your comment is uplifting.
( Hugs )..
Nice and lovely poem.
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Hello Sun-Girl, Nice to meet you. Thank you for the visit and kind comment.
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Very refreshing. Sometimes we need to take time to appreciate God's creation.... actually everyday, not sometimes. It does something positive to us too.
I admire your attitude of gratitude. :)
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Hello Elena, Good to see you. I agree. Thank you for coming, and your comment is thoughtful and appreciated.
Cheers (:D
Beautiful! ...Someday we shall live eternally beyond his spectacular created sky
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healthp, I believe that too. Won't it be wonderful? It's so nice to meet you. thank you for coming
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wonderful poem am copying it.........loved it!!!!
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Hello jeena, Nice to meet you. Thank you for visiting my Hub corner. Happy to share.
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That is so beautiful always exploring, it gives me goose bumps!! looking foirward to reading more voted up and awsom :)
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Hello secondimage, Nice to meet you. Thank you for kind words. Happy you enjoyed..
wow...got goosebumps while reading this beautiful poem. I agree, Ruby. Since we have to be with him one day, we should be nice to people around us.
Gotta be good to be with the lord :)
beautiful, awesome and voted up!!
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Hello Ruchira, Thank you for a beautiful comment. This was written over a year ago, and i still feel the same when i look toward the heavens..Cheers my friend..
true poem on god's creation
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Hello Anish Mishra, Nice to meet you. Thank you for a beautiful comment. Cheers
lovely
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Hello joythuthlove, Happy to meet you. Thank you for a lovely comment..Cheers..
A beautiful poem...feeling the world at peace. Understanding the beauty of nature is understanding our lives, people & the world around.
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Hello Carlop, Nice to see you and i agree, nature is so beautiful and when you think about all that it gives us, we are so grateful. Thank you for visiting my page....
I'd love to know the author's name and explore possible permission to use this poem.
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Hello Wayne Pratt, Nice to meet you. I would love to share my poem with you. I would like to know where you will use it. Thank you for coming to read..Cheers..
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