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A sacriface

Updated on April 17, 2014

Bluebird
came in through the open bedroom window
dropped a golden wheat
on my lap
then slunk off
to die .

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Kim,

      Thanks so much for this lovely comment

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      bluebird,

      Very true,I agree with you

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      AudreyHowitt,

      That was about inheriting a fortune.

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      Tijani,

      thought-provoking and loving the accompanying picture

      so much in so few words-a goal worth all our pursuit

      many blessings,

      Kim

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      bluebird 3 years ago

      A giving little bluebird - sacrifice is always sweet to the receiver.

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Oh i feel there is a story here behind this poem!