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A time telling of truth

Updated on April 4, 2010

Never ending sea

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A time telling of truth stared me strait into my face. A minute of failure an hour of denial. A gut feeling deep inside me. A mixture a potion of my heart and soul.

You pushed me finding deep inside a forest of thought. Darkness where a slipping stream comforted me into silence.

I have flowers in the spring. They left me. They died to never come again. Knowing what his deception is. I'm crawling to walk. Learning myself in an education of sin. All of this mingling dying together. Every one of them. Of us.

Each for me. Each because of me.

Swimming trying to reach the bottom of this never ending sea. That my silent stream feeds.

Please God just let me drown peacefully.

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    • Sunshiney31 profile image
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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      Thanks for the comment left Circus of Thought I will go and check out some of your hubs....I'm curious now :)

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      Circus of Thought 7 years ago from No.Cal

      Sweet! I do see similarities that's awesome there others out there who think and feel like I do. Yayy!

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      gramarye 7 years ago from Adelaide - Australia

      Beautiful! Loved the pictures too

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      jasonkern51 7 years ago from stuck in my head

      scarey for me......nicely gathered,and put to words.....

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      thevoice 7 years ago from carthage ill

      really entrancing hub thanks

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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      RTalloni I wrote this when I was about 25 or so.Alot has been learned since then.I have acceptance and forgivness and I know who I am in Christ.I thank you for your comment and prayers...

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      RTalloni 7 years ago from the short journey

      I know your last note is to RevLady, but I began praying for you when I read this after finding it while looking for hubs on truth. I am working on something different, but my heart went out to you. Your bio is interesting when compared to your writing. I don't know enough about your concerns, but I would like to mention an old quote, "Sin is as bad as God says it is." I hope you will ask God to help you believe what He says to you. May I suggest a NASB or an ESV for you to read as you pray.

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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      I'm curious RevLady if you can give me more insight into what you mean by your statement? I was in a state of self reflection and knowing how many times I have let myself be decieved and falling into that deception as if it were the truth..and then I wake up to see the calamity surrounding me all that has been wronged and lost...Where sin can take us really is the point of this poem. Sin against ourselves, sin against God, and sin against others..

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      RevLady 7 years ago from Lantana, Florida

      Ominously foreboding.

      Forever His,

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      cupid51 7 years ago from INDIA

      What an expression! I really love it.

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      SummerSteward 7 years ago from Duluth MN

      beautiful, deep and entrancing. Makes me wonder what your thinking.