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A woman-sensation

Updated on November 3, 2011

A woman-sensation. An expectation of a touch. A mirror with no reflexion. A castle with no ghosts. A genie of a woman. Talking over relationships - perfumed, ephemeral, unfaithful and occasional. Just the same. A woman on the verge of despair. A woman-memory. A woman-mania. Going back to the resurrection of the old stories. Immunized against the oblivion. In quarrel, a priori. ...with the flow of time. A woman running. Chasing after the running coffee. A woman-professional in catastrophes on the scale of a separate personality. A woman with the efforts of originality, with tortures of routine, with unmanageable tenderness. A hacker-woman who broke through the shell, broke down her fingers. Breaking the access code to your indifferent body, I am dissolved like chalk in milk, like a black kitten, in the dusk... I am melting in the air, like almond smell. A woman - a loop with no insurance. Time heals. Or wounds. Effect of envy because of the dose.


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      Anna Sidorova 6 years ago from Russia

      Thanks for your comments, guys!

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      dallaswriter 6 years ago from North Carolina

      Now if this doesn't inspire you, I don't know what will! What a reflection of so many of us!!!! I will have to read this a few more times, especially when I can give it the time it deserves! Thanks for sharing so many emotions all at once!!!

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      Tim Mitchell 6 years ago from Escondido, CA

      that is a whole bunch of stuff. You caught me with 'a priori.' I ponder 'dissolved like chalk in milk' contrasting substance with symbolism. For now I like best 'I am melting in the air, like almond smell.' Nice!