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Absence Of You (poem)

Updated on August 28, 2013

I woke from a dream the absence of you

An endless review of nothing at all

No hope of morning to cast away doubt

No comforting light to show me a way

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Timeless confusion toyed with my fog

Faceless familiars turned a blind eye

Soundless endeavor crying of heart

Endless and never ways to get out

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I dared not recall what dropped me here

Shouting in silence alone in a mob

Absent my reason purpose was lost

Far beyond fear was this nothing at all

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Then in from some window I heard a voice ring

Calling me back from a mistake I made

Forgiving the sound of How have you been

I just had a dream the absence of you

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      K.A.E Grove 4 years ago from Australia

      Potent haunting and beautiful

      A true jewel

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Dreams can fuse with reality and cause so mud doubt. You captured the feeing so well.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Sounds a bit haunting, but beautiful all the same.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Lovely poem, so beautifully expressed.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up. Wonderful poem. Dreamily expressed.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A lovely poem with man expressions

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      Indian Chef 4 years ago from New Delhi India

      beautiful poem, thanks for sharing

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I love this, so beautiful..To dream about one who is gone is sad. You captured it perfectly..

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      lupine 4 years ago from Southern California (USA)

      Dreams can be powerful...sometimes our minds are not at rest, even while we sleep. I wish you pleasant dreams from now on...

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      sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      Sadly, I live this daily. Memories are the voice that awaken me from the nightmare. Beautifully expressed. Voted up

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      I'd call that a Bad Dream!

      But, the poem is a work from the heart.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      I hope the dream was just a dream and not a nocturnal expression of loss.

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Beautiful and sad! Thanks for sharing!

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      Janis Leslie Evans 4 years ago from Washington, DC

      Very poignant and sad, the absence of love. The image is powerful. You are a gifted one when it comes to capturing the expression of loss. Bless you. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very heartrending and intense. Excellent write!

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Richard Ricky Hale 4 years ago from West Virginia

      Very beautiful, touching poem! Love the title, perfect for the message. Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and shared on FB.